In my program, I study all the exact sciences: mathematics, physics, and computer science, and at the same time, I am passionate about art, mostly literature and music.

In my program, I study the exact sciences, including mathematics, physics, and computer science. At the same time, I am deeply passionate about the arts, particularly literature and music.

1. "All the exact sciences" implies that you study every possible exact science. Perhaps that is your intent? Adding "including" clarifies that mathematics, physics, and computer science are examples.

2. Split into two sentences

Separating the ideas into two sentences makes it easier to read and avoids a run-on sentence.

3. "Deeply passionate" conveys stronger emotion than "passionate."

4. "The arts" is often used to refer to both literature and music better than just "art," which often refers specifically to visual arts.

However, this cannot be more wrong than how matters are in the world of humans, where everything remains extremely difficult to describe, analyze, and predict algorithmically.

However, nothing could be further from the truth when it comes to the world of humans, where everything remains exceedingly difficult to describe, analyze, and predict using algorithms.

More natural and commonly used idiom

That being said, the burgeoning AI technologies give hope that it is not impossible.

That said, the rapid advancements in AI technology offer hope that these challenges are not insurmountable.

This is just an idea of another way to phrase it.

Offer sounds better in my opinion, but both options work.

Burgeoning is a very formal and rare word, which may or may not be what you want

Furthermore, I study optimization from the members of Alexander Gasnikov’s group and from the next semester will study machine learning at Dorodnicyn Computing Centre, which is my basic department and has a very strong scientific group of Konstantin Vorontsov.

Furthermore, I study optimization under the guidance of members of Alexander Gasnikov’s group and, starting next semester, will study machine learning at the Dorodnicyn Computing Centre. This is my primary department and home to Konstantin Vorontsov’s renowned scientific group.


1. "To study from someone" sounds clunky and unnatural.

"Under the guidance of" is more precise and emphasizes mentorship and academic involvement.

2. "from the next semester" is incorrect and sounds odd. '"Starting next semester" is a more natural option.

3. "which is my basic department" sounds odd again and doesn't express quite what I think you're looking for. Likely a direct translation that doesn't work very well. "This is my primary department" is much clearer.

4. "Home to" is more fluid and professional than "has."

"Renowned" is just a good option vocab wise

I need a scientifically oriented place where I can try modern science not business.

"Conduct" is an option to replace "try" with.

HPlease help me get the summer internship at EPFL in Switzerland!

However, it seems to me that after the great revolution in physics in the last century, most of the models that we need to understand nature arhave already been built.

However, this cannot be more wrong than how matters are in the world of humans, where everything remains extremely difficultcomplicated to describe, analyze, and predict algorithmically.

Furthermore, I study optimization from the members of Alexander Gasnikov’s group, and from the next semester I will study machine learning at Dorodnicyn Computing Centre, which is my basic department and has a very strong scientific group of Konstantin Vorontsov.

These great teachers will give me all the tools I need to start my own research.