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kader

July 6, 2025

1
Help me

Dear friends
Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraiting ,speking and vocabullary
Thanks

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Dear friends

Hello
, everyone iI want to learn English, so please can you help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary

Thanks
.

I corrected "dear friends" as if you were writing a letter.

Dear friends ,
Hello everyone
i, I want to learn English so please can you, can you please help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary ?
Thanks
.

1. If you’re writing this like a letter, there should be an indent after “Dear friends,”
2. The way you phrased it can sound a bit odd, and depending on your tone can be taken as rude. A better way to phrase it is to drop the “so” and rephrase “please can you help me” to “can you please help me”
3. When using commas in lists, they go after every item in the list except for the final item, and an “an” goes before the final item
4. Also some spelling errors here

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Very good! I don’t think I can help much with speaking, but I can with writing and maybe vocabulary. Good luck with learning English!

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PacificOcean

July 6, 2025

0

Made a mistake with the 3rd correction, I meant to say “and” not “an”

Feedback

Very good!

remember spelling: pleas => please, wraitting => writing, and so on

have a list? ( wraitting ,speking ,vocabollary) 1. no brackets "()", the last word in the list has and before it writing, speaking and vocabulary

kader's avatar
kader

July 6, 2025

1

Thanks for the advace what about speaking i want to talk to native speakers if you can help please

Dear friends ,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks
.

Include a question mark when you're asking a question. Also, you should probably check the spelling of long words in a dictionary. Knowing how to spell words in English often isn't intuitive, unfortunately.

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Good job with the syntax, just keep working on the spelling!

kader's avatar
kader

July 6, 2025

1

Thanks for motivation what about speaking i want to talk to native speakers if you can help please

Dear friends,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) .
Thanks

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Dear friends ,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English so pleas can you please help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks

Dear friends
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English so please can you help me in ( wraitwriting , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks

kader's avatar
kader

July 6, 2025

1

Thanks , what about speaking and vocabulary 😅

Help me


Help mMe

Dear friends Hello evryone i want to learn English so pleas can you help me in ( wraitting ,speking ,vocabollary) Thanks


Dear friends
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English so please can you help me in ( wraitwriting , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks

Dear friends ,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English so pleas can you please help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks

Dear friends ¶
Hello

Hey
everyone i, I want to learn English, so pleas can you please help me in ( wrait
with wri
ting ,speaking , and vocabolulary) ¶
? Thanks!

Dear friends,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) .
Thanks

Dear friends ,
Hello ev
eryone i, I want to learn English, so please can you help me in ( wraitwith writing , speaking , and vocabolulary) ?
Thanks
.

Include a question mark when you're asking a question. Also, you should probably check the spelling of long words in a dictionary. Knowing how to spell words in English often isn't intuitive, unfortunately.

Dear friends Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraitting ,speking and vocabullary Thanks


Dear friends Hello everyone i want to learn English so please can you help me with wraiting ,speking and vocabullary Thanks


Dear friends ,
Hello everyone
i, I want to learn English so please can you, can you please help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary ?
Thanks
.

1. If you’re writing this like a letter, there should be an indent after “Dear friends,” 2. The way you phrased it can sound a bit odd, and depending on your tone can be taken as rude. A better way to phrase it is to drop the “so” and rephrase “please can you help me” to “can you please help me” 3. When using commas in lists, they go after every item in the list except for the final item, and an “an” goes before the final item 4. Also some spelling errors here

Dear friends

Hello
, everyone iI want to learn English, so please can you help me with wraiting , speaking, and vocabullary

Thanks
.

I corrected "dear friends" as if you were writing a letter.

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