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rain41

July 16, 2025

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Helloo

Hello everybody,I am new to a platform. I am improve my English skills because career life. I am Industrial Engineering. I'm waiting for your help. I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language is Turkish.

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Helloo

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform.

I am trying to improve my English skills because of career life.

I am Iworking in industrial Eengineering.

I'm waiting for your help.

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, m. My native language is Turkish.

Helloo

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform.

"this" because you're new to this specific platform:)

I amwant to improve my English skills because of my career life.

I am an Industrial Engineering.

I'm waiting for your helpadvices.

"advices" sounds a bit better, and the sentence sounds more natural.

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, because it's my native language is Turkish.

You don't have to repeat "Turkish" there:)

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Very good job, overally understandable, but some parts sound unnatural. Good luck and welcome to the site!

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rain41

July 16, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Helloo

Hello everybody, I am new to a the/this platform.

I am improveing my English skills becausefor my career life.

I am Ian industrial Eengineering.

No need to capitalize your job title

I'm waiting for your help.

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language is Turkish.

No need to repeat "Turkish" at the end

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Great job. Welcome to the website!

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rain41

July 16, 2025

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I will pay attention. You suggestion for so thank you.

Helloo


Helloo

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Hello everybody,I am new to a platform.


Hello everybody, I am new to a the/this platform.

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform.

"this" because you're new to this specific platform:)

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform.

I am improve my English skills because career life.


I am improveing my English skills becausefor my career life.

I amwant to improve my English skills because of my career life.

I am trying to improve my English skills because of career life.

I am Industrial Engineering.


I am Ian industrial Eengineering.

No need to capitalize your job title

I am an Industrial Engineering.

I am Iworking in industrial Eengineering.

I'm waiting for your help.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm waiting for your helpadvices.

"advices" sounds a bit better, and the sentence sounds more natural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language is Turkish.


I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language is Turkish.

No need to repeat "Turkish" at the end

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, because it's my native language is Turkish.

You don't have to repeat "Turkish" there:)

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, m. My native language is Turkish.

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