Hello there!

hammer_kandros

Jan. 17, 2020

My nickname is Hammer, and I'm someone who writes texts in both Spanish and English in their free time. I tend to use Grammarly to correct my mistakes, but since it's a program and not a real person, I don't trust it completely. So I'd like to receive feedback from real people on this site. I think it would be an excellent way to test how good my corrector is as well.

According to this app, my main issues are with commas since I never know when I should use them or not. I tend to mix Spanish and English rules, so probably that's my problem. I'd appreciate any help you can offer me.

Thank you a lot!

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kingofearth

Hello there!

My nickname is Hammer, and I'm someone who writes ~~texts~~ in both Spanish and English in their free time.

I tend to use Grammarly to correct my mistakes, but since it's a program and not a real person, I don't trust it completely.

So I'd like to receive feedback from real people on this site.

I think it would be an excellent way to test how good my corrector is as well.

According to thise app, my main issue~~s are~~ is with commas ~~sinc~~because I never know when I should use them or not.

I tend to mix Spanish and English rules, so ~~probably that's~~that is likely my problem.

I'd appreciate any help you can offer me.

Thank ~~you~~s a lot!

masemune

Hello there!

My nickname is Hammer, and I'm someone who writes texts in both Spanish and English in their free time.

I tend to use Grammarly to correct my mistakes, but since it's a program and not a real person, I don't trust it completely.

So I'd like to receive feedback from real people on this site.

I think it would be an excellent way to test how good my corrector is as well.

test seems weird to be here

According to this app, my main issues are with commas since I never know when I should use them or not.

I tend to mix Spanish and English rules, so probably that's my problem.

I'd appreciate any help you can offer me.

Thank ~~you~~s a lot!

Feedback

My suggestion would be to read a lot of novels written in English. You can see how professional writers use them and learn from it.

amuntiavall

Hello there!

My nickname is Hammer, and I'm someone who writes ~~texts~~ in both Spanish and English in their free time.

"writes texts" is not wrong but sounds weird.

I tend to use Grammarly to correct my mistakes, but since it's a program and not a real person, I don't trust it completely.

So I'd like to receive feedback from real people on this site.

I think it would be an excellent way to test how good my corrector is as well.

According to this app, my main issues are with commas since I never know when I should use them or not.

Thank ~~you~~s a lot!

It is either "Thank you!" or "Thanks a lot!"

Feedback

There is a lot of variation in how commas are used in English. I wouldn't trust your app to have a nuanced understanding of how commas can be used. Your English is excellent but slightly stilted. It doesn't sound quite like a native speaker.

Hello there!