July 1, 2025
Hello! I'm new here 😊
Hi everyone!
My name is Zuhal and I’m 13 years old. I’m from Afghanistan 🇦🇫. I want to practice English and make friends too!
I like:
🌸 Drawing
🎶 Listening to BTS
🦁 Lions
🍨 Ice cream
💖 Pink and white colors
✈️ My dream is to become a pilot in the future!
If you want to talk, I would love to be your friend 😊
Please correct my English if I make any mistakes. Thank you so much! 💕
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Hello! I'm new here 😊
Hi everyone!
My name is Zuhal and I’m 13 years old.
I’m from Afghanistan 🇦🇫.
I want to practice English and make friends too!
I like:
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🌸 Drawing
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🎶 Listening to BTS
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🦁 Lions
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🍨 Ice cream
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💖 Pink and white colors
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✈️ My dream is to become a pilot in the future!
If you want to talk, I would love to be your friend 😊 Please correct my English if I make any mistakes.
Thank you so much!
💕
Hello! I'm new here 😊
Hi everyone!
My name is Zuhal and I’m 13 years old.
I’m from Afghanistan 🇦🇫.
I want to practice English and make friends too!
I like:
¶
🌸 Drawing
¶
🎶 Listening to BTS
¶
🦁 Lions
¶
🍨 Ice cream
¶
💖 Pink and white colors
¶
✈️ My dream is to become a pilot in the futuresomeday!
“In the future” isn’t wrong, but it’s unnatural because it’s unnecessary: “my dream” already tells us you’re talking about the future.
If you want to talk, I would love to be your friend 😊 Please correct my English if I make any mistakes.
Thank you so much!
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Welcome to LangCorrect 😊
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Your English is perfect here, well done! The only thing is, in the UK, we spell the verb as "practise" and the noun as a "practice" - however, in the US, they spell both the verb and the noun "practice" :)
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