Hello, I am Nick, a 37 -years -old Chinese guy trying to write

Remember, -year-old would be one word, and trying is the "current" (continuous) form.

Yesterday I posted my first writing practice writing on Reddit.

When I logged on again in the afternoon, it made me surprised me that iI received some feedbacks, that not only encouragesd me but also gave patient corrections.

"It surprised me that", as "made me surprised that" does not fit the context. Feedback is usually used in the singular, and they "encouraged" you (past), not "encourages". Same for "gave". I know that must have been confusing as Chinese has no tenses :(.

Thank yous all you guys makfor warmly welcoming me warm here.

"Making me warm" does not really carry the same meaning as "wamly welcoming me", so I corrected according to what I thought was right. :)

I replied to all the comments underon my post and corrected my post in a right way to save for the record.

"in a right way" is already expressed, and saying it twice in the same sentence is not really how anybody says it.

Today my topic is Eenglish Learning-learning / learning english.

No capitals in the middle of the sentence.

I have learned English for more than 20 years from when I was a middle school student, but actually my English is not well with the time passhas worsened with the passing of time.

Firstly, most people now use learnt, now learned (but it's fine), and secondly, "is not well" is not really that.. ~meaningful~ in this context. To worsen would be the best verb in this context.

There were many reasons I thought, of: no English speaking environment in China, no time tofor reading more English books, no money to join some English courses, etc.

You thought *of* the reasons, no? :)

iIt seemsed that I always wasted of my time to think why but no change for me wiof why, without changing myself throutgh any action.

I'm sorry, but that sentence was quite... botched... (not good). "It *seemed*" (past), "think" takes the "of', "waste" does not. Reflexive form, "myself". Also, I took the "without", used it at the start, and used something else later, but you could do something else. :)

Ironically, English ihas become more and more important in my career development.

I need to prepare both English working files and presentations are both i need to prepare with accurate English wording and grammar to fulfill.

The word order at the start was a little wrong. English has subject first, followed by verbs, followed by objects, which you did the opposite of. :(

My boss usually showedgave me the pressure to pick it up as multinational company requirement.

"To give pressure", not "to show pressure".

Am I too old to learn it?

"To learn" is transitive, meaning, it always takes an object. (And, no, in my opinion, it's never too late! :) )

Today I woke up early and read a book called “New Concept English” which is famous in China and spoke loudly in my balcony.

"spoke loudly", you spoke, or the book spoke? ;) I know it's clear from context, but it would look nicer with "I spoke".

Luckily it is warm in my city for gettingwhen I get up, as it is located in the south of my country.

Thanks for reading my dDay 2 post.

Hello, I am Nick, a 37 -years -old Chinese guy trying to write

When I logged on again in the afternoon, it made me surprised that iI received some feedbacks- not only encourages but also patient corrections.

Hello, I am Nick, a 37 -years -old Chinese guy trying to write

Yesterday I posted my first writing practice writing on Reddit.

When I logged on again in the afternoon, it made meI was surprised to see that iI had received some feedbacks —not only encouragesment, but also patient corrections.

Thank you all you guys for making me warmfeel welcome here.

I replied to all the comments under my post and corrected my post in a right way to save for recordlater.

I have learned English for more than 20 years, starting from I was a middle school student, but actually my English is not well with theso good after all this time has passed.

There were many reasons I thought, of why: no English speaking environment in China, no time to reading more English books, no money to join some English courses etc.

iIt seems that I always wasted of my time to think of why, but there will be no change for me without any action.

Ironically, English ihas become more and more important in my career development.

EnglisI need to prepare both working files and presentations are both i need to prepare with accurate Englishin English, with proper wording and grammar to fulfill.

My boss usually showed me thehas been pressuring me to pick it up as multinational company requirement.

I usuallyoften wonder how to improve my English with qualitative changes.

Some paragraphticles told me that practice wais very important for language learning.

Today I woke up early and read a book called “New Concept English,” which is famous in China, and spoke loudly ion my balcony.

Luckily it is warm in my city for getting up as, since it is located in the south of my country.

Hello, I am Nick, a 37 years old Chinese guy trying to write

Yesterday I posted my first writing practice writing on Reddit.

When I logged on again in the afternoon, it made meI was surprised to see that i received some feedbacks. It not only encouragesd me, but also had patient corrections.

Thank you all guys for making me warmfeel welcome here.

I replied allto all of the comments under my post and corrected my post in a right way to save for the record.

I have learned English for more than 20 years from when I was a middle school student, but actuallyhowever my English is not well with the time pass.good after all this time.

There were many reasons I thought, of: there is no English speaking environment in China, no time to reading more English books, no money to join some English courses etc.

it seemsed that I always wasted of my time to thinking why, but there was no change for me without any action.

IronicallyBut, English is become more and more important in my career development.

EnglishI need to prepare working files and presentations are both i need to preparein English, with accurate English wording and grammar to fulfill.

My boss usually showed me the pressures me to pick it up as it is a multinational company requirement.

I usually wonder how to improve my English withusing qualitative changes.

Some paragraphseople told me that practice was very important for language learning.

Today I woke up early and read a book called “New Concept English” which is famous in China and I spoke loudly ion my balcony.

Luckily it is warm in my city for getting up as it is located in the south of my country.

Hello, I am Nick, a 37 years -old Chinese guy trying to writepractice writing.

Yesterday I posted my first writing practice writing on Reddit.

Most people will understand "Practice writing" as a verb, "Writing practice" is a noun. So you should use "writing practice" here.

When I logged on again in the afternoon, it made meI was surprised that i received some feedbacks. I received not only encouragesment but also patient corrections.

Thank you all guys makgiving me a warm welcome here.

I replied to all the comments under my post and corrected my post in a right way to save for recordlater.

I have been learneding English for more than 20 years, starting from when I was a middle school student, but actually my English is not well with the time passafter this time has passed, my English is not so good.

There were many reasons I thought, no English speaking environment in China, no time to reading more English books, no money to join some English courses etc.

iIt seemsed that I was always wasted ofing my time to thinking why, but no change for me without anyne of this will change for me if I don't take action.

IronicallyAs it turns out, English is becomeing more and more important in my career development.

"Ironically" doesn't quite fit here. Ironically can be used if you something suddenly changed in an opposite way to what you expected. If you gave up leaning English and the next day your boss said you need to start learning English, that would be ironic.

I need to prepare both English working files and presentations are both i need to prepare with accurate English wording and grammar to fulfill.

My boss usually showed me thehas been pressuring me to pick it up as multinational company requirement.

Today I woke up early and read a book called “New Concept English”, which is famous in China, and spokeI practiced speaking out loudly i on my balcony.

Saying "speaking loudly" here sounds unnatural because it is disconnected from practicing your English. Also, "speaking loudly" sounds like "yelling". What you mean is reading something "out loud" (talking to yourself or others). It sounds more natural if you specify why you are "speaking out loud".

Luckily it is warm in my city for getting up as it is located in south of my country.

Not sure what you mean by "for getting up". Do you mean "warm enough to stand outside on the balcony"?