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stevensuljko

Sept. 21, 2022

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I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable. Rich people suffer because of riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, People who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it. I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, But what I do remember is that deny your suffering will not do you any good, you must do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.
The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems you become a happy person.

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I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable.

Alt: I have been reading

Rich people suffer because of riches,their wealth and poor people suffer because of poverty,. People who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it.

Separated into separate sentences because it flows better.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gaive in the book, But what. However, I do remember is that to deny your suffering will not do you any good, and that you must do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.

*In English, we talk about things that happen in a book in present tense.
* "do something about it" and "try to solve your problems" feel redundant. Either one is fine but I wouldn't use both.

The author said that bBy trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems youeventually develop. Unfortunately, that's just life. Problems are inevitable. By doing something about them, you have a better chance of becomeing a happy person.

Run-on sentence. Separated to add clarity.

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Good job!

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I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable.

Rich people suffer because of their riches/being riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, Ppeople who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it/just the same.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, Bbut what I do remember is that denying your suffering will notnever does you any good, you must instead try to do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.

The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop/evolve but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems you become a happyier person.

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Great work 😁 if you have any questions do not be afraid to ask me

I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable.

Rich people suffer because of riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, Ppeople who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, Bbut what I do remember is that denying your suffering will not do you any good, y. You must do something about it, y. You must try to solve your problems.

Alternative correction: "what I do remember is that to deny your suffering will not do you any good." Either is correct, but the original correction sounds more casual and would more likely be heard in conversation.

The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life i. It's inevitable, and by trying to solve your problems you become a happy person.

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Be careful with those run-on sentences, friend. Otherwise this was a good journal entry about the book. :)

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stevensuljko

Sept. 22, 2022

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Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it

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I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable.


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I was reading a book about suffering and how suffering is inevitable.

Alt: I have been reading

Rich people suffer because of riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, People who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it.


Rich people suffer because of riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, Ppeople who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it.

Rich people suffer because of their riches/being riches, poor people suffer because of poverty, Ppeople who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it/just the same.

Rich people suffer because of riches,their wealth and poor people suffer because of poverty,. People who don't have families suffer because of it and those who have families suffer because of it.

Separated into separate sentences because it flows better.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, But what I do remember is that deny your suffering will not do you any good, you must do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.


I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, Bbut what I do remember is that denying your suffering will not do you any good, y. You must do something about it, y. You must try to solve your problems.

Alternative correction: "what I do remember is that to deny your suffering will not do you any good." Either is correct, but the original correction sounds more casual and would more likely be heard in conversation.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gave in the book, Bbut what I do remember is that denying your suffering will notnever does you any good, you must instead try to do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.

I don't remember all the examples that the author gaive in the book, But what. However, I do remember is that to deny your suffering will not do you any good, and that you must do something about it, you must try to solve your problems.

*In English, we talk about things that happen in a book in present tense. * "do something about it" and "try to solve your problems" feel redundant. Either one is fine but I wouldn't use both.

The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems you become a happy person.


The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life i. It's inevitable, and by trying to solve your problems you become a happy person.

The author said that by trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop/evolve but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems you become a happyier person.

The author said that bBy trying to solve your problems , new problems will develop but that's life it's inevitable and by trying to solve your problems youeventually develop. Unfortunately, that's just life. Problems are inevitable. By doing something about them, you have a better chance of becomeing a happy person.

Run-on sentence. Separated to add clarity.

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