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ksushalev

Nov. 5, 2022

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hello everyone

Today i decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how i spent my day
I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i oversleep, because i had to spend my son to the camp.
So my morning started with running.
After i saw my son off, i could drink a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.
When i done with my breakfast i called my friend and he gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.
I couldn't tell anything. That inspired me to practice more...
Finally i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter. While she falling asleep i surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision. How you can guess i met this site and now i am writing here to greet you)

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Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day.

"I", not "i" regardless of where its position is in a sentence.

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i. I oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to thea camp.

So, my morning started with a running.

After iI saw my son off, i couldI was able to drink a cup of coffee and then feed my younger daughter.

When i done withfinished my breakfast, i called my friend and he gave me a ride to a debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borderslimits(?).

I couldn't tell anythingcontribute anything (to the discussion).

Finally, i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

While she was falling asleep i surfed into the internet, trying to find some apps for my decision.to practise my English.

HowAs you can guess i met, I came across this site and now iI am writing here to greet you)

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хорошо написано ) не забывайте, что "Я" нужно писать как "I", a не "i".

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ksushalev

Nov. 6, 2022

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Thank you for your help

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applebubble

Nov. 6, 2022

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no problem ) I wrote a new journal entry on my profile if you want to check it out.

Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i8.20am realising I oversleept, because i haI was supposed to spend my son to the camp.

So mMy morning started with running.

After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then I fed my younger daughter.

When iI was done with my breakfast i, I called my friend and h. He gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.

Do you mean boarders or boundaries?
You can also split this sentence into two, as it would be easier to read.

That inspired me to practice more...

Finally iI returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.

HowCould you can guess iI met this site and now iI am writing here to greet you).

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Remember to capitalise "I" when writing in English :)
Sounds like you had a busy day, hope you had good rest. Good job on the attempt!

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ksushalev

Nov. 6, 2022

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Thank you)

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ksushalev

Nov. 6, 2022

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When iI was done with my breakfast i, I called my friend and h. He gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.

the second one

Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and iI oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to the camp.

So my morning started with running.

You could also say "So I started my morning by running" or "So I started my morning with a run"

After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.

you could also say "I was able to drink a cup of coffee"

When i done withI finished my breakfast i, I called my friend andso he gacould give me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.

I couldn't tell anythinghad a hard time figuring out what to say.

You could also say "I was barely able to say anything"

That inspired me to practice more...

Finally i, I returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.

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ksushalev

Nov. 6, 2022

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Thank you

hello everyone


Today i decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how i spent my day


Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day

Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day

Today iI decided to practice my writing skills here, so let's started with how iI spent my day.

"I", not "i" regardless of where its position is in a sentence.

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i oversleep, because i had to spend my son to the camp.


I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and iI oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to the camp.

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i8.20am realising I oversleept, because i haI was supposed to spend my son to the camp.

I woke up at twenty minutes past eight and i. I oversleept, because iI had to spend my son to thea camp.

So my morning started with running.


So my morning started with running.

You could also say "So I started my morning by running" or "So I started my morning with a run"

So mMy morning started with running.

So, my morning started with a running.

After i saw my son off, i could drink a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.


After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then fed my younger daughter.

you could also say "I was able to drink a cup of coffee"

After iI saw my son off, i couldI driank a cup of coffee and then I fed my younger daughter.

After iI saw my son off, i couldI was able to drink a cup of coffee and then feed my younger daughter.

When i done with my breakfast i called my friend and he gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.


When i done withI finished my breakfast i, I called my friend andso he gacould give me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.

When iI was done with my breakfast i, I called my friend and h. He gave me a ride to debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borders.

Do you mean boarders or boundaries? You can also split this sentence into two, as it would be easier to read.

When i done withfinished my breakfast, i called my friend and he gave me a ride to a debate club, where we discussed privacy and it's borderslimits(?).

I couldn't tell anything.


I couldn't tell anythinghad a hard time figuring out what to say.

You could also say "I was barely able to say anything"

I couldn't tell anythingcontribute anything (to the discussion).

That inspired me to practice more...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter.


Finally i, I returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

Finally iI returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

Finally, i returned back to home, had a meal and put to bed my daughter to bed.

While she falling asleep i surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.


While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.

While she was falling asleep i, I surfed into the internet trying to find some apps for my decision.

While she was falling asleep i surfed into the internet, trying to find some apps for my decision.to practise my English.

How you can guess i met this site and now i am writing here to greet you)


HowCould you can guess iI met this site and now iI am writing here to greet you).

HowAs you can guess i met, I came across this site and now iI am writing here to greet you)

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