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Reyhan5yy

Sept. 7, 2025

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Hello

I'm Reyhan I'm here to write daily and improve my writing skill , actually I may have some problems like other people but it's ok, infact I'm struggling with perfectionism. now after 7 years learning English , I chose teaching as my job , I really like it and I know sometimes it's so difficult because children don't listen to you but generally it's so interesting and I don't know how I can express my feeling about it , but I really like my students also i get impression my students also have same feelings about me , Maybe other days I write more🙂.

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Hello

I'm Reyhan I'm here to write daily and improve my writing skill ability, actually I may have some problems like other people but it's ok, in. In fact, I'm struggling with perfectionism.

When speaking about English skills such as reading, writing, speaking, and listening the word 'ability' instead of 'skill.' Also, the comma comes directly after the final letter. Start a new sentence after the word 'ok.' In fact is two words and generally followed by a comma.

nNow after 7 years learning English , I chose teaching as my job ,profession. I really like it and I know sometimes it's so difficult because children don't listen to you but. However, generally it's so interesting and I don't know how I can express my feelings about it , but I really like my students a. Also iI get the impression that my students also have sameimilar feelings about me ,. Maybe other days I write more🙂.

The word 'profession' is more formal than 'job.' However, is a more formal word than 'but.' Feelings is plural because you are referring to the fact that you have multiple emotions.

Feedback

Just remember the comma always come directly after the last letter. Also, try to reduce the length of your sentences. As a rule, once you have more than two or three verbs in a sentence that feel unorganised. Good luck with your teaching!

Hello


Hello

now after 7 years learning English , I chose teaching as my job , I really like it and I know sometimes it's so difficult because children don't listen to you but generally it's so interesting and I don't know how I can express my feeling about it , but I really like my students also i get impression my students also have same feelings about me , Maybe other days I write more🙂.


nNow after 7 years learning English , I chose teaching as my job ,profession. I really like it and I know sometimes it's so difficult because children don't listen to you but. However, generally it's so interesting and I don't know how I can express my feelings about it , but I really like my students a. Also iI get the impression that my students also have sameimilar feelings about me ,. Maybe other days I write more🙂.

The word 'profession' is more formal than 'job.' However, is a more formal word than 'but.' Feelings is plural because you are referring to the fact that you have multiple emotions.

I'm Reyhan I'm here to write daily and improve my writing skill , actually I may have some problems like other people but it's ok, infact I'm struggling with perfectionism.


I'm Reyhan I'm here to write daily and improve my writing skill ability, actually I may have some problems like other people but it's ok, in. In fact, I'm struggling with perfectionism.

When speaking about English skills such as reading, writing, speaking, and listening the word 'ability' instead of 'skill.' Also, the comma comes directly after the final letter. Start a new sentence after the word 'ok.' In fact is two words and generally followed by a comma.

I'm Reyhan I'm here to write daily and improve my writing skill , actually I may have some problems like other people but it's ok, in fact I'm struggling with perfectionism.


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