Dec. 17, 2020
Heavy Snow
In my town, it has been snowing for these three days. It's rare that snow piles up like this, so people who live in the city are not used to this situation. The traffic became jammed and some railways stopped. Seeing snow is funny but walking through snow is hard; it's slippy and cold. Therefore, I really appreciate online classes.
In my town, it has been snowing for these last three days.
It's rare that snow piles up like this, so people who live in themy city are not used to this situation.
ThereforeAt the moment, I really appreciate online classes.
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I lived in Sapporo for a month in December. I have never seen so much snow! If you're not used to it snow is really inconvenient.
Dec. 18, 2020
Hokkaido is an area of heavy snowfall! So, people who live there are strong on snow. Thank you!
Heavy Snow
In my town, it has been snowing for these three days.
It's rare thatfor snow to piles up like this, so people who live in the city are not used to this situation.
The traffic has becaome jammed and some railways stopphave been closed.
It may sound more natural to continue the journal in the present perfect tense (have + past participle), rather than change it to the past simple, as we are still talking about what has happened in the last 3 days.
Seeing snow is funnyexciting but walking through snow is hard; it's slippy and cold.
Are you sure you want to use the word "funny"? If something is funny, it makes you laugh. Maybe the word "exciting" is better. The choice is up to you.
Therefore, I really appreciate online classes.
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Nice work on this journal, and well done for the fantastic use of a semi-colon :)
Where I live, sometimes we have no snow in winter, and other years we have loads of snow! It's quite unpredictable. But I agree - I really appreciate online classes too. They're very convenient.
Dec. 18, 2020
Thank you for your helpful correction and comment!
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In my town, it has been snowing for these three days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In my town, it has been snowing for the |
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It's rare that snow piles up like this, so people who live in the city are not used to this situation. It's rare It's rare that snow piles up like this, so people who live in |
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The traffic became jammed and some railways stopped. The traffic has bec It may sound more natural to continue the journal in the present perfect tense (have + past participle), rather than change it to the past simple, as we are still talking about what has happened in the last 3 days. |
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Seeing snow is funny but walking through snow is hard; it's slippy and cold. Seeing snow is Are you sure you want to use the word "funny"? If something is funny, it makes you laugh. Maybe the word "exciting" is better. The choice is up to you. |
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