Dec. 17, 2025
Heavy Rain
On the West Coast, rainy days are very common in this season. But today was a little unique.
I like a brand called Vessi. Their items are really good for rainy weather, because the products are all waterproof.
I have a raincoat and a pair of shoes from the brand. Usually, they work very well. I don't need to carry an umbrella thanks to the items, but today was different. Even though I wear the shoes and the coat, I could feel wet. Fortunately, I have a small umbrella, so I couldn't get all wet.
Later on, someone told me, a wind and rain warning around this area today. No wonder about it!
Heavy Rain
On the West Coast, rainy days are very common in this season.
But today was a little unique.
I like a brand called Vessi.
Their items are really good for rainy weather, because the products are all waterproof.
I have a raincoat and a pair of shoes from the brand.
Usually, they work very well.
I don't need to carry an umbrella thanks to the items, but today was different.
Even though I wearore the shoes and the coat, I could feelfelt wet.
This sentence would be structured differently to reflect that you are recalling what happend to you.
Fortunately, I haved a small umbrella, so I couldn't get all wetsoaked.
For personal taste maybe swap repeating words. Otherwise it is fine.
Later on, someone told me, about a wind and rain warning around this area today.
No wonder about it!
I don't know what your orginally intended to say.
"No wonder!" would be saying "Of course it is windy and rainy in this area today!"
or
"No worries!" would be saying "I have the Vessi products so I don't need to be worried about getting wet!"
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The text is good, but try to find synonyms for repeating words to make it more well-rounded. And be careful of the tenses when you are telling a story.
Dec. 17, 2025
Thank you for your feedback! I just simply say no wonder! Haha
Keep in the same tense is very important but I always struggle with that! Thanks for reminding me.
On the West Coast, rainy days are very common in this season.
"this season" itself can be an adverb, no need for "in".
But today was a little unique.
I like a brand called Vessi.
Their items are really good for rainy weather, because the products are all waterproof.
I have a raincoat and a pair of shoes from theis brand.
"the" is technically fine, but since you *just* mentioned it, "this" fits better!
Usually, they work very well.
I don't need to carry an umbrella thanks to these items, but today was different.
Even though I wearore the shoes and the coat, I could feelfelt wet.
1) Use can use "the" once when listing multiple things
2) Past tense
3) When you describe an experience or state which you were in, especially with an adjective, it's just:
"I feel / felt wet"
"I feel / felt tired"
"I feel / felt cold"
"I could feel" is used for when you *perceive* something, usually a noun, e.g:
"I could feel his tiredness"
"I could feel the rain on my back"
"I could feel the water in my shoes"
Fortunately, I haved a small umbrella, so I couldidn't get all wet.
Later on, someone told me, that there was a wind and rain warning around this area today.
No wonder about itthen!
You could rephrase this as "No wonder then it rained so much!" or any other phrase. Just "No wonder then!" can also imply it :)
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Sounds like a nice brand :)
Dec. 18, 2025
It is! I highly recommend their product if you live on the West Coast.
Thanks for your corrections! They are really easy to understand. I appreciate that you write many examples for me!
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On the West Coast, rainy days are very common in this season. On the West Coast, rainy days are very common "this season" itself can be an adverb, no need for "in". On the West Coast, rainy days are very common |
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I have a raincoat and a pair of shoes from the brand. I have a raincoat and a pair of shoes from th "the" is technically fine, but since you *just* mentioned it, "this" fits better! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually, they work very well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't need to carry an umbrella thanks to the items, but today was different. I don't need to carry an umbrella thanks to these items, but today was different. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though I wear the shoes and the coat, I could feel wet. Even though I w 1) Use can use "the" once when listing multiple things 2) Past tense 3) When you describe an experience or state which you were in, especially with an adjective, it's just: "I feel / felt wet" "I feel / felt tired" "I feel / felt cold" "I could feel" is used for when you *perceive* something, usually a noun, e.g: "I could feel his tiredness" "I could feel the rain on my back" "I could feel the water in my shoes" Even though I w This sentence would be structured differently to reflect that you are recalling what happend to you. |
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Fortunately, I have a small umbrella, so I couldn't get all wet. Fortunately, I ha Fortunately, I ha For personal taste maybe swap repeating words. Otherwise it is fine. |
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Later on, someone told me, a wind and rain warning around this area today. Later on, someone told me Later on, someone told me |
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No wonder about it! No wonder You could rephrase this as "No wonder then it rained so much!" or any other phrase. Just "No wonder then!" can also imply it :) No wonder I don't know what your orginally intended to say. "No wonder!" would be saying "Of course it is windy and rainy in this area today!" or "No worries!" would be saying "I have the Vessi products so I don't need to be worried about getting wet!" |
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