June 4, 2021
As the weather report said, it was windy and rainy today. I didn't feel like going out but I had to do.
In fact, I live in the mountain. Every time I leave home and go to somewhere, I need to ride on my scooter because of its steep and long way.
I don't like that so much, but today that's different.
Riding on my scooter in bad weather made me tired and upset :(
I hope it'll be sunny tomorrow.
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As the weather report said, it was windy and rainy today.
I didn't feel like going out but I had to do.
Or "I had to do it" - "do" is transitive here and, if you include it, needs an object. But the sentence works without "do".
In fact, I live ion thea mountain.
"the mountain" is okay, especially if you feel like it's obvious which mountain you mean - if you live in a place with only one mountain, for example. But "a mountain" feels more natural here.
"in the mountain" - you live in a tunnel that's been dug deep inside, underground.
"In fact" sounds a bit strange, there doesn't seem to be a clear reason for saying it.
Every time I leave home and go to somewhere, I need to ride on my scooter because of itsit's such a steep and long way.
"Go to somewhere" is okay but the "to" isn't necessary and it sounds a little more natural without it.
I see why you'd use "because of", and in a different sentence it would work well. Like, "every time I leave home I need to carry an umbrella because of its frequent rainstorms". But here it sounds strange.
I don't like that so much, but today that's different.
Not sure what you're trying to say here. Maybe "I don't *mind* that so much, but today was different"? Contrasting between how usually it isn't so bad, but today it was bad?
Riding on my scooter in bad weather made me tired and upset :(
I hope it'll be sunny tomorrow.
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I hope it'll be sunny too! I love rain and bad weather but I wouldn't like to ride a scooter up and down a mountain in it :(
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As the weather report said, it was windy and rainy today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I didn't feel like going out but I had to do. I didn't feel like going out but I had to Or "I had to do it" - "do" is transitive here and, if you include it, needs an object. But the sentence works without "do". |
In fact, I live in the mountain. In fact, I live "the mountain" is okay, especially if you feel like it's obvious which mountain you mean - if you live in a place with only one mountain, for example. But "a mountain" feels more natural here. "in the mountain" - you live in a tunnel that's been dug deep inside, underground. "In fact" sounds a bit strange, there doesn't seem to be a clear reason for saying it. |
Every time I leave home and go to somewhere, I need to ride on my scooter because of its steep and long way. Every time I leave home and go "Go to somewhere" is okay but the "to" isn't necessary and it sounds a little more natural without it. I see why you'd use "because of", and in a different sentence it would work well. Like, "every time I leave home I need to carry an umbrella because of its frequent rainstorms". But here it sounds strange. |
I don't like that so much, but today that's different. I don't like that so much, but today that's different. Not sure what you're trying to say here. Maybe "I don't *mind* that so much, but today was different"? Contrasting between how usually it isn't so bad, but today it was bad? |
Riding on my scooter in bad weather made me tired and upset :( This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I hope it'll be sunny tomorrow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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