Jan. 4, 2020
Healthy Sleep Habits
Sleeping is an important part of our lives. It's essential for human being to sleep an adequate time everyday. Our mood and concentration is greatly affected by our sleeping pattern. The appropriate duration of sleeping can vary depending on various factors. Age is considered top of these. As the person get older, they need less time for sleeping.
The time of sleeping is also significant. Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning. Our bodies are designed to sleep early, and to have an enough time of sleeping. If we stay up late and then sleep even more hour in the morning, this will not compensate or give the same results as sleeping early. We may not notice it clearly, but our healthy sleeping habit would provide us lots of benefits and will change our life for the better.
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1- Only capitalize the first letter of the line.
2- Sleep should be a gerund in this case as "Sleep" is a noun.
Sleeping is an important part of our lives.
No need for a gerund here, using the noun is more appropriate
It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate time everyday.
Our mood and concentration isare greatly affected by our sleeping pattern.
Age is considered the top of thesem.
As the person gets older, they need less time forto sleeping.
Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning.
Jan. 7, 2020
Thanks a lot.
Healthy Sleep Habits
Sleeping is an important part of our lives.
It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate amount of time everyday.
You can also write: "It's essential for human beings to sleep enough everyday."
Beings = more than 1, being = just 1
Our mood and concentration isare greatly affected by our sleeping patterns.
The appropriate duration of sleeping can vary depending on various factors.
Age is considered top be the most important of these.
As thea person gets older, they need less time forto sleeping less.
Alternative way to say it
The time of sleeping is also significHow much sleep one gets is also very important.
Alternative
Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning.
Our bodies are designed to sleep early, and to havgo to bed early, so that we can get enough time of sleeping.
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OMG.. I have been like a night owl. I go to bed super late and wake up past noon. I should definitely change my sleeping habits lol. Thanks for the interesting read!
Jan. 7, 2020
Thank you Masemune for your corrections and comments. Yeah, when I sleep late I often become less efficient when doing my work in the next day. Good luck for you on your battle with sleeping :)
Healthy Sleep Habits
Sleeping is an important part of our lives.
It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate amount of time everyday.
Our mood and concentration isare greatly affected by our sleeping pattern.
The appropriate duration of sleeping can vary depending on various factors.
Age is considered top be the most important of these.
As the personyou get older, theyyou need less time forto sleeping.
The time ofat which one sleepings is also significant.
Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning.
Our bodies are designed to get to sleep early, and to hav so we can get enough time of sleeping.
If we stay up late and then sleep even morfor one hour more in the morning, this will not compensate or givemake up for it or yield the same results as sleeping early would have.
Compensate would also be suitable but isn't something a native speaker would say normally.
While we may not notice it clearly, but our, adopting a healthy sleeping habitroutine would provide us lots ofmany benefits and willcould change our lifeves for the better.
I'm not sure if you were trying to encourage people to adopt a better sleeping habit or not. Your use of conditional suggested to me that you were. If not, ignore this correction.
Jan. 7, 2020
Thanks a lot for the correction and comments you made, I will make sure to consider it with my future writing.
Healthy Sleep Habits
Sleeping is an important part of our lives.
It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate time everyday.
Our mood and concentration isare greatly affected by our sleeping patterns.
The appropriate duration of sleeping can vary depending on various factors.
Age is considered tophe most important of these.
As thea person gets older, they need less time for sleeping.
The time ofat which one sleepings is also significimportant.
Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning.
Our bodies are designed to sleep early, and to have an enough time to get the proper amount of sleeping.
If we stay up late and then sleep even more houlonger in the morning, this will not compensate or givemake up for it, and it will not yield the same results as sleeping early.
We may not notice it clearly, but our healthy sleeping habit woulds can provide us lots ofmany benefits and willcan change our lifeves for the better.
Jan. 7, 2020
Thank you for your corrections, I appreciate your time on this.
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Sleeping is an important part of our lives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Sleep No need for a gerund here, using the noun is more appropriate |
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It's essential for human being to sleep an adequate time everyday. It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate time everyday. It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate amount of time everyday. It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate amount of time everyday. You can also write: "It's essential for human beings to sleep enough everyday." Beings = more than 1, being = just 1 It's essential for human beings to sleep an adequate time everyday. |
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Sleeping early at night is different from sleeping in the morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our bodies are designed to sleep early, and to have an enough time of sleeping. Our bodies are designed to sleep early Our bodies are designed to get to sleep early Our bodies are designed to |
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If we stay up late and then sleep even more hour in the morning, this will not compensate or give the same results as sleeping early. If we stay up late and then sleep even If we stay up late and Compensate would also be suitable but isn't something a native speaker would say normally. |
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We may not notice it clearly, but our healthy sleeping habit would provide us lots of benefits and will change our life for the better. We may not notice it While we may not notice it I'm not sure if you were trying to encourage people to adopt a better sleeping habit or not. Your use of conditional suggested to me that you were. If not, ignore this correction. |
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