Sept. 11, 2020
Health management
Yesterday I had to take a day off from work because I was so dizzy. When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people worried about me. I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the same room knew about it, even though I had only contacted the people I work with. Get enough sleep, don't stress yourself out, get your nutrition in! Taking care of yourself is part of the job!
昨日は目眩がひどくて会社をお休みした。今日回復して出社したら、色んな人から心配された。一緒に仕事をしている人にしか連絡していなかったのに、同じ部屋の人が全員知っていて、驚きと同時に恥ずかしかった。睡眠をしっかりとること、ストレスを溜めないこと、栄養をとること！体調管理も仕事のうち！
Health management
Yesterday, I had to take a day off from work because I was so dizzy.
When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people were worried about me.
I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the same room knew about it, even though I had only contacted the people I work with.
A subordinate clause "even though..." only requires a comma if it goes before the main clause "I was surprised...".
The phrase "at the same time" isn't necessary to indicate you experienced both emotions when you entered the room.
Because you are in the room, you don't need to specify it was the "same room",
"Get enough sleep", d"Don't stress yourself out", g"Get your nutrition in!"
Taking care of yourself is part of the job!
Sept. 11, 2020
Great Writing! I really understood the situation and your embarrassment about the situation.
Health management
Yesterday I had to take a day off from work because I was so dizzy.
When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people were worried about me.
I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the same room knew about it, even though I had only contacted the people I work with.
Get enough sleep, don't stress yourself out, get your nutrition in!
Taking care of yourself is part of the job!
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Nice job. This writing is clear, easy to understand, and contains very few errors!
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Yesterday I had to take a day off from work because I was so dizzy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Yesterday, I had to take a day off from work because I was so dizzy. |
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When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people worried about me. When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people were worried about me. When I recovered and came to work today, a lot of people were worried about me. |
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I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the same room knew about it, even though I had only contacted the people I work with. I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the I was surprised and embarrassed at the same time that all the people in the same room knew about it, even though I had only contacted the people I work with. A subordinate clause "even though..." only requires a comma if it goes before the main clause "I was surprised...". The phrase "at the same time" isn't necessary to indicate you experienced both emotions when you entered the room. Because you are in the room, you don't need to specify it was the "same room", |
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Get enough sleep, don't stress yourself out, get your nutrition in! This sentence has been marked as perfect! "Get enough sleep", |
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Taking care of yourself is part of the job! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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