Feb. 14, 2022
Health condition of my father
This is my second journal on this site.
I came back to my hometown to get together with my parents during the Chinese new year. Until then, I knew that my father had been found to have atherosclerotic arteries in his brain during the physical examination which is easy to cause stroke. I am so worried about his health. After doing some search, I found that this disease is commonly found among most of senior people, but there is no particularly effective treatment plan so far.
When I was a child, I always thought that my parents would never get old, but now I really feel that they are getting older and older, which makes me have mixed feelings.
这是我在这个平台上写的第二篇日记。
我在春节的时候回老家与家人一起过年了。那时候，我才知道，我的父亲在体检中检查出了脑血管的粥样动脉硬化。这种症状很容易导致脑卒中。我很担心他的身体状况。在查询了一些资料之后我发现很多中老年人会得这样的病，但是目前为止还没有特别有效的治疗方案。
小时候，我总觉得父母是不会老的，但是现在，我真真切切的感受到了他们在逐渐衰老，这使我五味杂陈。
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This is my second journal on this site.
I came back to my hometown to get together with my parents during the Chinese new year.
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I am so worried about his health.
After doing some research, I found that this disease is commonly found among most of senior peoplest commonly in seniors, but there is no particularly effective treatment plan so far.
When I was a child, I always thought that my parents would never get old, but now I really feel that they are getting older and older, which makgives me have mixed feelings.
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Well done. I'm sorry to hear about your father's health. I agree that it can be difficult to watch your parents get older, especially when their health starts to decline.
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Really sorry to hear about your father :(
Feb. 14, 2022
Thanks for your corrections.
By now, what I can do is spend as much time with them as I can.
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