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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 22, 2021

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Conscious About Health

In the past, people thought less about their health.
Being healthy was just not being sick.
And there was not enough information about health.

But these days, it has changed a lot.
First, people can easily get information about health on the internet.
We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..

Next, people try to check their body on a regular basis.
With the regular check, they understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.

Lastly, these days, people try to work out as often as they can.
So they usually go to the gym to train their bodies.
The gyms also provide many training programs like yoga, Pilates, cross fit and so on.

Once again, people are more conscious about their health these days.

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Conscious About Health

In the past, people thought less about their health.

Being healthy was just not being sick.

And tThere was not enough information about health.

But tThese days, it has changed a lot.

If you want to use conjunctions, you need to use them to connect clauses. For example, your past three sentences could read: "Being healthy was just not being sick, and there was not enough information about health, but, these days, it has changed a lot." 'And' and 'but' don't go at the beginning of sentences.

Firstor example, people can easily get information about health on the internet.

Use 'first' only if you've previously established that you're going to elaborate a list of reasons. For example: "There are many reasons why this has changed recently. First, ..."

We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..

Next, pPeople try talso check up on their body on a regular basis.

With thea regular check-up, they can understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.

LastlyFurthermore, these days, many people try to work out as often as they can.

So they usually go to the gym to train their bodies.

The gGyms also provide many training programs likthat feature yoga, Ppilates, cross fit and so on.

Once againverall, people are more conscious about their health these days.

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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 23, 2021

402

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In the past, people thought less about their health.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Being healthy was just not being sick.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And there was not enough informations about health.


But these days, it is changed a lot.


First, people can easily get informations about health.


We know what food is good for body and what we should do to stay healthy..


Next, people try to check their body on a regular basis.


Next, pPeople try talso check up on their body on a regular basis.

With the regular check, they understand current state of their body and what they need to do.


Lastly, these days, people try to work out as often as they can.


LastlyFurthermore, these days, many people try to work out as often as they can.

So they usually go to the gym to train their body.


Gym also provides many training program like yoga, Pilates, cross fit and so on.


Once again, people are more conscious about their health these days.


Once againverall, people are more conscious about their health these days.

Conscious About Health


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And there was not enough information about health.


And tThere was not enough information about health.

But these days, it has changed a lot.


But tThese days, it has changed a lot.

If you want to use conjunctions, you need to use them to connect clauses. For example, your past three sentences could read: "Being healthy was just not being sick, and there was not enough information about health, but, these days, it has changed a lot." 'And' and 'but' don't go at the beginning of sentences.

First, people can easily get information about health on the internet.


Firstor example, people can easily get information about health on the internet.

Use 'first' only if you've previously established that you're going to elaborate a list of reasons. For example: "There are many reasons why this has changed recently. First, ..."

We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..


We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..

With the regular check, they understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.


With thea regular check-up, they can understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.

So they usually go to the gym to train their bodies.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The gyms also provide many training programs like yoga, Pilates, cross fit and so on.


The gGyms also provide many training programs likthat feature yoga, Ppilates, cross fit and so on.

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