Nov. 8, 2019
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone for waking up earlier this morning and studying on my school project that waiting on the my desk for a long time. Just as i expected, i dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
Just as iI expected, iI dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
Just as I expected, I dismissed all of them and kept sleeping.
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An unwanted habit for many but still a very relatable one (:
I set up more thanover 4 alarms on my phone forto wakinge up earlier this morning and studying on my school project that waihas been sitting on the my desk for a long time.
I set over 4 alarms on my phone to wake up earlier this morning and study on my school project that has been sitting on my desk for a long time.
waiting is also fine! sitting just sounds a bit better because it's an object, and it wouldn't really be waiting per se.
An Unwanted Habit An Unwanted Habit
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone forto wakinge up earlier this morning , so I cand studying on my school project that has been waiting on the my desk for a long time.
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone to wake up earlier this morning, so I can studying on my school project that has been waiting on my desk for a long time.
Just as iI expected, iI dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
Just as I expected, I dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
An Unwanted Habit An Unwanted Habit
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone for waking up earlier this morning and studyingthis morning to wake up and work on my school project that's been waiting on the my desk for a long time.
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone this morning to wake up and work on my school project that's been waiting on the my desk for a long time.
studying is more like looking over your notes for an exam. to work on a project just sounds more natural in this context.
Just as iI expected, iI dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
Just as I expected, I dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
First person "I" is capitalized in English. I have no clue why but it is.
An unwanted habit or An Unwanted Habit (title) An unwanted habit or An Unwanted Habit (title)
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone forto wakinge up earlier this morning and studyingwork on my school project that had been waiting on the my desk for a long time.
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone to wake up earlier this morning and work on my school project that had been waiting on my desk for a long time.
Just as iI expected, iI dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
Just as I expected, I dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
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I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone for waking up earlier this morning and studying on my school project that waiting on the my desk for a long time.
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone studying is more like looking over your notes for an exam. to work on a project just sounds more natural in this context.
I set up more than 4 alarms on my phone
I set waiting is also fine! sitting just sounds a bit better because it's an object, and it wouldn't really be waiting per se. |
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Just as i expected, i dismissed all of them, and kept sleeping.
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Just as First person "I" is capitalized in English. I have no clue why but it is.
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