It can not only soothes my entangled nerves but also gives me strength when faced with adversity. It not only soothes my entangled nerves but also gives me strength when faced with adversity.

Your sentence makes sense but this is a more natural way to say it

It can not only soothe my entangled nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity. It can not only soothe my nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity.

Originally was correct, but I felt like this weird was a bit excessive (usually people just stick with "soothes my nerves")

I am not saying music is a panacea of everyall problems, but I do think it's therapeutic. I am not saying music is a panacea of all problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

I am not saying music is a panacea of everyfor all problems, but I do think it's therapeutic. I am not saying music is a panacea for all problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning. This morning I felt a bit down in the dumps.

Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning. This morning I felt a bit down in the dumps.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and, layid in my bed, and startinged to listen to some wholesome music. Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom, laid in my bed, and started to listen to some wholesome music.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and layied down in my bed, starting to listen to some wholesome music. Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and lied down in my bed to listen to some wholesome music.

Normally I would just play some pop songs, but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals. Normally I would just play some pop songs, but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals.

Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again. Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of space travel once again.