eEleventh jJournal Eleventh Journal

eEleventh journal Eleventh journal

eEleventh jJournal Eleventh Journal

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I've got received a positive pregnancy test result this morning. I received a positive pregnancy test result this morning.

I've got a positive pregnancy test this morning. I got a positive pregnancy test this morning.

I've got a positive pregnancy test this morning. I got a positive pregnancy test this morning.

I've got a positive pregnancy test this morning. I got a positive pregnancy test this morning.

I've got a positive pregnancy test this morning. I got a positive pregnancy test this morning.

AI had a bunch of symptoms I went through, such as, including a slight fiever, nausea, increased appetite, stomach ache, etc, which are actual all symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman, always made me expect and so on, which meant that I anticipated the result a little bit. I had a bunch of symptoms, including a slight fever, nausea, increased appetite, stomach ache, and so on, which meant that I anticipated the result a little bit.

Your original sentence makes sense the way it was written, I have just rephrased it a bit to make it clearer and a bit less repetitive

I had already triedaken several pregnancy tests for days, but everyach result gavebrought me nothing but disappointment. I had already taken several pregnancy tests, but each result brought me nothing but disappointment.

I alrehady tried several pregnancy tests for days, but every result gave mecame with nothing but disappointment. I had tried several pregnancy tests for days, but every result came with nothing but disappointment.

I had already tried several pregnancy tests for days, but every result gave me nothing but disappointment. I had already tried several pregnancy tests for days, but every result gave me nothing but disappointment.

I already triedtried using several pregnancy tests for days, but every result gave me nothing but disappointment. I tried using several pregnancy tests for days, but every result gave me nothing but disappointment.

I almost gave up, but finally, I've got the result I wanted today!! I almost gave up, but finally, I got the result I wanted today!!

I almost gave up, but finally, I've got the result today!! I almost gave up, but finally, I got the result today!!

I almost gave up, but finally, I've got the result today!! I almost gave up, but finally, I got the result today!!

I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until my hubbyhe came back home from work, lyingand i lied by saying that my period had just begun. I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until he came back home from work, and i lied by saying that my period had just begun.

I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until my hubby came home from work, lyingand lied by saying that my period had just begun. I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until my hubby came home from work, and lied by saying that my period had just begun.

I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until my hubby came home from work, lying and lied by saying that my period had just begun. I wanted to surprise my hubby, so I waited until my hubby came home from work and lied by saying that my period had just begun.

And when he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the shelf in the bathroom so that he could see it while washing his hands. And when he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the shelf in the bathroom so that he could see it while washing his hands.

And when he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the shelf in the bathroom so that he could see it while washingen he went to wash his hands. And when he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the shelf in the bathroom so that he could see it when he went to wash his hands.

And wWhen he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the self in the bathroom shelf so that he could see it while washing his hands. When he came, I put the positive pregnancy test kit on the bathroom shelf so that he could see it while washing his hands.

Because I was recording him, whe looked at me a bith suspicious lookingly as he was washing the hands, and then, ta-da-! Because I was recording him, he looked at me a bit suspiciously as he was washing the hands, and then, ta-da-!

Because I was recording him, with suspicious lookinghile he was washing thehis hands , he was suspicious, and then, ta-da-! Because I was recording him while he was washing his hands , he was suspicious, and then, ta-da-!

Because I was recording him, withhe looked suspicious lookingwhen he was washing the hands and then, ta-da-! Because I was recording him, he looked suspicious when he was washing the hands and then, ta-da-!

BHe looked suspicious because I was recording him, with suspicious lookinghile he was washing the hands and then, ta-da-! He looked suspicious because I was recording him while he was washing the hands and then, ta-da-!

Because I was recording him, he was washing his hands with a suspicious looking he was washing the hands on his face, and then, ta-da-! Because I was recording him, he was washing his hands with a suspicious look on his face, and then, ta-da-!

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hHe foundsaw it. He saw it.

hHe found it. He found it.

He seemed to be so much more excited than I expected that, and I was touched. by his reaction. He seemed to be so much more excited than I expected, and I was touched by his reaction.

He seemed to be so much more excited than I had expected that. Seeing this, I was touched. He seemed to be so much more excited than I had expected. Seeing this, I was touched.

He seemed to be so much more excited than I expected that. I was touched. He seemed to be so much more excited than I expected. I was touched.

It was successful. It was successful.

I think it would be better to say (instead of "it") what exactly was successful here, as it's not too clear whether you mean the test, or the surprise for your husband.

I hope that my second baby and I both will always bewill be born healthy and in a perfect condition. I hope that my second baby will be born healthy and in perfect condition.

It's more typical to say "healthy" for a new born baby.

I hope that my second baby and I both, will alwaysboth be in a perfect condition. I hope that my second baby and I, will both be in perfect condition.

I hope my second baby and I both will always be in a perfect conditionwill both be healthy and safe. I hope my second baby and I will both be healthy and safe.

I hope my second baby and I both will always be in a perfect conditionhealthy and safe. I hope my second baby and I both will always be healthy and safe.

In a perfect condition - replace with something more specific, for example, healthy, safe, together

I hope my second baby and I both willwill both always be in a perfect condition. I hope my second baby and I will both always be in a perfect condition.

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A bunch of symptoms I went through, such as afelt, were slight fiever, nausea, cravings, stomach ache, etc, which are actually all symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman, alway gets, this made me expect it. A bunch of symptoms I felt, were slight fever, nausea, cravings, stomach ache, etc, which are actually all symptoms a pregnant woman gets, this made me expect it.

A bunch of symptoms I went throughhad, such as a slight fiver, nausea, cravings, stomachache, etc, which aere actually all symptoms one canould possibly have as a pregnant woman, always made me expect it. A bunch of symptoms I had, such as a slight fiver, nausea, cravings, stomachache, etc, were actually all symptoms one could possibly have as a pregnant woman, made me expect it.

A bunch of symptoms I went throughMy symptoms, such as a slight fiver, nausea, cravings, stomach ache, etc., which are actualare all symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman, always made me expect i. As a result, I expected the result. My symptoms, such as a slight fiver, nausea, cravings, stomach ache, etc., are all symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman. As a result, I expected the result.

AI went through a bunch of symptoms I went through, such as a slight fiever, nausea, cravings, stomachache, etc, which are actually all the symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman, alwayswhich made me expect it. I went through a bunch of symptoms, such as a slight fever, nausea, cravings, stomachache, etc, which are actually all the symptoms one can possibly have as a pregnant woman, which made me expect it.