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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 12, 2024

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Have you ever visited Indonesia?

Let's date back to 2014. It was the year my first time travelling to Indonesia. Interestingly, the tour guide reminded us that the country we were going to experience was Indonesia, not India, they are two distinctive countries.

Indonesia is a traditional Muslim democratic country with 80% of its population having faith in Allah, around 10% are Christians, and the remaining 10% follow other religions. Surprisingly, the language of Indonesia is built on the structure of Malaysians, therefore, people from the two countries can communicate with each other, very similar to the relationship between Spanish and Portuguese.


回到2014年,我第一次到印尼旅游。有趣的是,导游提醒我们即将体验的国家是印尼,不是印度,他们是完全不同的国家。

印尼是典型的穆斯林国家,80%人口信奉真主, 约10%的人口是基督教,其余10%信仰其它宗教。惊奇的是,印尼语是基于马来语创建的,这样这2个国家的人能相互交流,类似西班牙语与葡萄牙语。

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Have you ever visited Indonesia?

Let's daterewind back to 2014.

It was the year my first time travelling to Indonesia.

You could also say something like: “It was the year where I first traveled to/visited Indonesia”.

Interestingly, the tour guide reminded us that the country we were going to experience was Indonesia, not India, they are two distinctive countries.

Indonesia is a traditional Muslim democratic country with 80% of its population having faith in Allah, around 10% are Christians, and the remaining 10% follow other religions.

Surprisingly, the language ofspoken in Indonesia is built on the structure of Malaysians, therefore, people from the two countries can communicate with each other, very similarly to the relationship between Spanish and Portuguese.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections!

Surprisingly, the language of Indonesia is built on the structure of Malaysians, therefore, people from the two countries can communicate with each other, very similar to the relationship between Spanish and Portuguese.


Surprisingly, the language ofspoken in Indonesia is built on the structure of Malaysians, therefore, people from the two countries can communicate with each other, very similarly to the relationship between Spanish and Portuguese.

Have you ever visited Indonesia?


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Let's date back to 2014.


Let's daterewind back to 2014.

It was the year my first time travelling to Indonesia.


It was the year my first time travelling to Indonesia.

You could also say something like: “It was the year where I first traveled to/visited Indonesia”.

Interestingly, the tour guide reminded us that the country we were going to experience was Indonesia, not India, they are two distinctive countries.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Indonesia is a traditional Muslim democratic country with 80% of its population having faith in Allah, around 10% are Christians, and the remaining 10% follow other religions.


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