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Have you ever tried any alternative therapy?

I received acupuncture once for my stiff neck years ago, but it didn’t work. I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health. Maybe I will start going to swimming gym for my neck and back.

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Have you ever tried any alternative therapy?

I received acupuncture once for my stiff neck years ago, but it didn’t work.

I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health.

Maybe I will start going to swimming at the gym for my neck and back.

"swimming gym" is not a usual phrase, so I assumed you meant a gym with a pool.

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I have tried acupuncture for a long lasting pain on my arms due to blood clotting and it actually did recovered after my 7th visits. If it didn't work for you, maybe you can give yoga a try.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I feel like I wrote it quite well this time.

Have you ever tried any alternative therapy?

I received acupuncture once for my stiff neck years ago, but it didn’t work.

I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health.

Maybe I will start going to swimming at the gym for my neck and back.

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TOMO_o

yesterday

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I feel like I wrote it quite well this time.

Have you ever tried any alternative therapyies?

I received acupuncture once for my stiff neck years ago, but it didn’t work.

I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health.

Maybe I will start going to swimming gym for my neck and back.

"Swimming gym" is unusual, but could say: "I will start going to the pool" or "I will start going to a gym with a pool."

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This is a good paragraph that flows very naturally and only had a few minor mistakes. Good work!

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TOMO_o

yesterday

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I feel like I wrote it quite well this time.

Have you ever tried any alternative therapy?


Have you ever tried any alternative therapyies?

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I received acupuncture once for my stiff neck years ago, but it didn’t work.


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I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health.


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I think that moderate exercise is the most effective way to recover our health.

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Maybe I will start going to swimming gym for my neck and back.


Maybe I will start going to swimming gym for my neck and back.

"Swimming gym" is unusual, but could say: "I will start going to the pool" or "I will start going to a gym with a pool."

Maybe I will start going to swimming at the gym for my neck and back.

Maybe I will start going to swimming at the gym for my neck and back.

"swimming gym" is not a usual phrase, so I assumed you meant a gym with a pool.

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