Aug. 21, 2025
Have you ever traveled abroad?
I went to Belgium when I was in university. My cousin’s family lived there at that time and I stayed at their home for a week. We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam,Netherlands. This experiences would be the trigger I started to study English seriously.
I went to Belgium when I was in university.
This is correct. If you want more natural US English, then "when I was in college."
My cousin’s family lived there at that time and I stayed at their home for a week.
We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam,Netherlands.
You don't need the "Netherlands" part.
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Aug. 22, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I've been using the same expressions a lot lately, so I'll try to make them more natural little by little.
Aug. 22, 2025
You're doing GREAT!!!!! It helps so much repeating the same thing.
When I use Japanese it helps making it easier to remember the same sentence structures repeating very similar things.
I went to Belgium when I was (still) in university.
It's not required, but "still" is often also used in sentences like this. It's just a small emphasis that you are no longer in university
My cousin’s family lived there at that/the time and I stayed at their home for a week.
We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam, The Netherlands.
This experiences would be the trigger Ifor me to started to studying English seriously.
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Aug. 21, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
I've been using the same expressions a lot lately, so I'll try to make them more natural little by little.
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Have you ever traveled abroad? |
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I went to Belgium when I was in university. I went to Belgium when I was (still) in university. It's not required, but "still" is often also used in sentences like this. It's just a small emphasis that you are no longer in university I went to Belgium when I was in university. This is correct. If you want more natural US English, then "when I was in college." |
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My cousin’s family lived there at that time and I stayed at their home for a week. My cousin’s family lived there at that/the time and I stayed at their home for a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam,Netherlands. We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam, The Netherlands. We spent five days in Brussels and two days in Amsterdam You don't need the "Netherlands" part. |
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This experiences would be the trigger I started to study English seriously. This experience Th |
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