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July 27, 2025

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Have you ever had an unfogettable birthday?

The most unforgettable birthday was when I turned 20. We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so That day was the first time to drink for me. Unfortunately I couldn't drink at all. They have often said it's poor thing, but I don't feel anything because I can't drink in the first place.

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Have you ever had an unforgettable birthday?

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age 20 in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time for me to drink for me.

Unfortunately, I couldn't drink at all.

They have often said it's poora bad thing, but I don't feel anythingthat way because I can't drink in the first place.

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TOMO_o

July 28, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time to drink for meI could drink.

They have often said it's poora bad thing, but I don't feel anythingthat way because I can't drink in the first place.

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Pretty good today! I made a couple of changes to make it more natural sounding but this was mostly good as is.

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TOMO_o

July 27, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time toI driank for me.

Unfortunately, I couldn't drink at all.

They have often said it's pooralcohol is a bad thing, but I don't feel anythmingd because I can't drink in the first place.

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Awesome job!

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TOMO_o

July 27, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Have you ever had an unforgettable birthday?

The most unforgettable birthday I had was when I turned 20.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 ageyears old in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time to drinking for me.

They have often said it's a poor thing, but I don't feel anything because I can't drink in the first place.

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TOMO_o

July 27, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Have you ever had an unfogettable birthday?

The mostMy unforgettable birthday was when I turned 20.

WeYou can legally drink alcohol legally from 20 ageat 20 in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time toI driank for me.

Unfortunately I couldn't drink at all.

They havPeople often said iy that's a poor thing, but I doidn't feel anything because I caouldn't drink in the first place.

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TOMO_o

July 27, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

Have you ever had an unfogettable birthday?


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Have you ever had an unforgettable birthday?

Have you ever had an unforgettable birthday?

The most unforgettable birthday was when I turned 20.


The mostMy unforgettable birthday was when I turned 20.

The most unforgettable birthday I had was when I turned 20.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so That day was the first time to drink for me.


WeYou can legally drink alcohol legally from 20 ageat 20 in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time toI driank for me.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 ageyears old in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time to drinking for me.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time toI driank for me.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time to drink for meI could drink.

We can drink alcohol legally from 20 age 20 in Japan, so Tthat day was the first time for me to drink for me.

Unfortunately I couldn't drink at all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Unfortunately, I couldn't drink at all.

Unfortunately, I couldn't drink at all.

They have often said it's poor thing, but I don't feel anything because I can't drink in the first place.


They havPeople often said iy that's a poor thing, but I doidn't feel anything because I caouldn't drink in the first place.

They have often said it's a poor thing, but I don't feel anything because I can't drink in the first place.

They have often said it's pooralcohol is a bad thing, but I don't feel anythmingd because I can't drink in the first place.

They have often said it's poora bad thing, but I don't feel anythingthat way because I can't drink in the first place.

They have often said it's poora bad thing, but I don't feel anythingthat way because I can't drink in the first place.

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