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Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for nose, four for lungs. I’ve had a sick of lungs named Pneunothorax, which form a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful. So even now, I try to avoid something that press my lungs like a scuba diving.

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Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs namlung condition called Pneunmothorax, which formcaused a hole oin my lungs, and it was very painful.

So even now, I try to avoid something that pressapplies pressure on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

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I actually also have Pneumothorax when I was young and had an operation too. Though it only occurred once, thankfully.

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Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, - two for my nose, and four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs named Plung disease called a pneunmothorax, which form a hole oere a hole formed in my lungs, and it was very painful.

OR: "I've previously had a pneumothorax, where a hole formed in my lung and caused it to collapse. It was very painful."

Your sentence is a bit long, so it would flow better to break it into 2 seperate sentences.

So even now, I try to avoid someanything that would press on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

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Have you ever had an operation?

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I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for nose, four for lungs.

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, - two for my nose, and four for my lungs.

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs named Pneunothorax, which form a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful.

I’ve had a sick of lungs named Plung disease called a pneunmothorax, which form a hole oere a hole formed in my lungs, and it was very painful.

OR: "I've previously had a pneumothorax, where a hole formed in my lung and caused it to collapse. It was very painful." Your sentence is a bit long, so it would flow better to break it into 2 seperate sentences.

I’ve had a sick of lungs namlung condition called Pneunmothorax, which formcaused a hole oin my lungs, and it was very painful.

So even now, I try to avoid something that press my lungs like a scuba diving.

So even now, I try to avoid someanything that would press on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

So even now, I try to avoid something that pressapplies pressure on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

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