Kindred Spirit

Aug. 4, 2021

Have you ever been stuck in some terrible weather?

Yes. It's a big rain while I was on the road to go home. The rain came fast. I rode fast to a yard to avoid the rain. A wind blew strong. It thundered. The trees made a sound. The road flooded. I looked at the sky. It was grey and black. I thought about going home early to be safe.

Corrections

Have you ever been stuck in some terrible weather?

Yes.

It's a big rain while I was on the road to goThere was heavy rain on the road as I was going home.

The rain came fast.

I rode fastquickly to a yard to avoid the rain.

I'm assuming you're on a horse, otherwise swap "rode" for "drove".

A wind blew strong.

It thundered.

The trees made a sound.

The road flooded.

I looked at the sky.

It was grey and black.

I thought about going home early to be safe.

Kindred Spirit

Aug. 5, 2021

Thank you. I rode a motorbike. I was not on a horse.

Have you ever been stuck in some terrible weather?


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Yes.


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It's a big rain while I was on the road to go home.


It's a big rain while I was on the road to goThere was heavy rain on the road as I was going home.

The rain came fast.


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I rode fast to a yard to avoid the rain.


I rode fastquickly to a yard to avoid the rain.

I'm assuming you're on a horse, otherwise swap "rode" for "drove".

A wind blew strong.


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It thundered.


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The trees made a sound.


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The road flooded.


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I looked at the sky.


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It was grey and black.


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I thought about going home early to be safe.


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