Dec. 26, 2025
Have you ever been on a diet?
Yes, I have been on a diet for months now. I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthy. However, I might have been a little too fat. I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthyier.
However, I might have begotten a little too fat.
Saying out of nowhere that you have gotten a little too fat is a bit out of nowhere. This change connects you to trying to eat more.
I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day.
"fine dishes" is correct but "yummy food" is a bit more natural and conversational.
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Great job! I hope you get your health figured out (if this is real).
Dec. 27, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I felt like I was able to write it quite simply and carefully, but there are still some unnatural parts here and there.
However, I'm starting to get used to thinking about it a bit.
I used to be a very thin and I often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more andto make my body more healthy.
However, I might have becomen a little too fat (as a result).
I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes(a lot) on New Year’s Day.
“Fine dishes” sounds unnatural but it works.
The sentence also works if you just remove “Fine dishes”
You can also add “a lot” which makes more sense.
Dec. 27, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I felt like I was able to write it quite simply and carefully, but there are still some unnatural parts here and there.
However, I'm starting to get used to thinking about it a bit.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthyier.
Dec. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I felt like I was able to write it quite simply and carefully, but there are still some unnatural parts here and there.
However, I'm starting to get used to thinking about it a bit.
Have you ever been on a diet?
Yes, I have been on a diet for months now.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthyier.
I also think it sounds more natural if you say "...tried to eat more to make..." instead of using "and".
However, I might have been a little too fat.
This is technically fine as it is, but since you're describing a change from one state to another, I think saying something like "However, I might have gotten a little too fat" sounds much more natural.
I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day.
Dec. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I felt like I was able to write it quite simply and carefully, but there are still some unnatural parts here and there.
However, I'm starting to get used to thinking about it a bit.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthy.
However, I might have beegotten / grown a little too fat.
"Have gotten" or "have grown" shows the change happened over time.
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Your last sentence is fine.
An alternative with a slightly different meaning is
"I think I won’t be able to stop myself from eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day."
"Stop myself from" = prevent myself from
This is a common expression.
Dec. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I felt like I was able to write it quite simply and carefully, but there are still some unnatural parts here and there.
However, I'm starting to get used to thinking about it a bit.
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I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think I won’t be able to stop eating “Fine dishes” sounds unnatural but it works. The sentence also works if you just remove “Fine dishes” You can also add “a lot” which makes more sense. I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day. "fine dishes" is correct but "yummy food" is a bit more natural and conversational. |
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