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Have you ever been on a diet?
Yes, I have been on a diet for months now. I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthy. However, I might have been a little too fat. I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthyier.
Have you ever been on a diet?
Yes, I have been on a diet for months now.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthyier.
I also think it sounds more natural if you say "...tried to eat more to make..." instead of using "and".
However, I might have been a little too fat.
This is technically fine as it is, but since you're describing a change from one state to another, I think saying something like "However, I might have gotten a little too fat" sounds much more natural.
I think I won’t be able to stop eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day.
I used to be a very thin and often got a sick, so I then tried to eat more and make my body more healthy.
However, I might have beegotten / grown a little too fat.
"Have gotten" or "have grown" shows the change happened over time.
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Your last sentence is fine.
An alternative with a slightly different meaning is
"I think I won’t be able to stop myself from eating fine dishes on New Year’s Day."
"Stop myself from" = prevent myself from
This is a common expression.
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However, I might have been a little too fat. However, I might have "Have gotten" or "have grown" shows the change happened over time. However, I might have been a little too fat. This is technically fine as it is, but since you're describing a change from one state to another, I think saying something like "However, I might have gotten a little too fat" sounds much more natural. |
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