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Have you ever asked for someone's autograph?

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph. Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, since I'm not that interested in celebrities. Am I odd? Do you have any autograph and Whose one?

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I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

Do you have any autograph and Wwhose oneis it?

I think there's some authors where I'd like to get a signed book, but most celebrities I don't think much about autographs.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write as simply as possible this time, so I think it's a little easier to read.

ALSO POSSIBLE: Have you ever asked for someanyone's autograph?

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autographMORE SUCCINCTLY: No, I have never done so.

Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, sinceWhat would I do such a thing? I'm not that interested in celebrities.

Do you have any autograph and Whose on, if so, whose?

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In some ways, handwriting is a mirror of the soul. Donald Trump's signature, for instance, attests to his over-sized ego. I do enjoy keeping the signatures of friends. However, most celebrities do not interest me.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me natural-sounding words and frequently used vocabulary and expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
I tried to write as simply as possible this time, so I think it's a little easier to read.

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The correction "What would I do such a thing?" is a Typo, it should be "Why would I do such a thing?"

Have you ever asked for someone's autograph?

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

The use of "not ever" instead of "never" is not incorrect, but it feels a bit clunky because of the use of "I've" instead of "I have".

You could have used:
"I have not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph." (Which sounds more formal, and is personally how I talk when I want to better enunciate my words. It also makes me sound like I speak slowly though).

Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, since I'm not that interested in celebrities.

Since "since I'm not that interested in celebrities." is the explanation of "I wouldn't know what to do with it," It shouldn't have a comma/pause before it.

Am I odd?

Do you have any autograph and Whose ons? If so, whose?

The phrase "if so, ..." is an extremely common way to follow up a yes-no question.

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Great Job! I have not ever asked for someone's autograph, but I did (when I was studying physics) want Neil DeGrasse Tyson's Autograph before. Though I never really tried to get it. He is a famous modern American astrophysicist that I always saw on TV as a kid.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me natural-sounding words and frequently used vocabulary and expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
I tried to write as simply as possible this time, so I think it's a little easier to read.

Have you ever asked for someone's autograph?

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, since I'm not that interested in celebrities.

Am I odd?

Do you have anyone's autograph and W, if so, whose one?

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I've also never asked for anyone's autograph for similar reasons. I don't think it's that odd - if anything, I think it's odd that people can be so interested in the life of someone they've never met.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write as simply as possible this time, so I think it's a little easier to read.

Am I odd?


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Have you ever asked for someone's autograph?


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ALSO POSSIBLE: Have you ever asked for someanyone's autograph?

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.


I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

The use of "not ever" instead of "never" is not incorrect, but it feels a bit clunky because of the use of "I've" instead of "I have". You could have used: "I have not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph." (Which sounds more formal, and is personally how I talk when I want to better enunciate my words. It also makes me sound like I speak slowly though).

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autographMORE SUCCINCTLY: No, I have never done so.

I've not ever felt inclined to ask for someone's autograph.

Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, since I'm not that interested in celebrities.


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Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, since I'm not that interested in celebrities.

Since "since I'm not that interested in celebrities." is the explanation of "I wouldn't know what to do with it," It shouldn't have a comma/pause before it.

Even if I did, I wouldn't know what to do with it, sinceWhat would I do such a thing? I'm not that interested in celebrities.

Do you have any autograph and Whose one?


Do you have anyone's autograph and W, if so, whose one?

Do you have any autograph and Whose ons? If so, whose?

The phrase "if so, ..." is an extremely common way to follow up a yes-no question.

Do you have any autograph and Whose on, if so, whose?

Do you have any autograph and Wwhose oneis it?

I think there's some authors where I'd like to get a signed book, but most celebrities I don't think much about autographs.

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