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TOMO_o

March 28, 2025

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Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?

When I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face. I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek. My exhaustion was blown away!

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When I I fell asleept i on the train the other day because I was very tired, and I felt something touching my face.

I fell asleep

I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek.

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That's super cute!

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TOMO_o

March 29, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?

When I slept iile I was sleeping on the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something ion my face.

{I woke up with wondering what had touched me | I startled awake} and realized that a baby sitting next meto me had touched my cheek.

My exhaustion was blown awayevaporated!

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Well done.

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TOMO_o

March 29, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?

W The other day, when I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face.

Sleeping because your are tired sounds repetitive. It could be assumed that your are sleeping because you are tired so delete

I woke up with wonderingconfused and realized that athe baby sitting next me, touched my cheek.!

Is "wondering" a person? A noun? Or are you trying to say an emotion?

My exhaustionI was blown away!

or "I was shocked", "I was so surprised", "I was dumbfounded"

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I recommend for you to learn more vocabulary other wise good work

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TOMO_o

March 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

WThe other day, when I slept ion the train the other day because I was very tired,. I felt something ion my face.

I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby was sitting next me. The baby touched my cheek.

My exhaustion was blown away!

Not sure what you mean by 'exhaustion' in this case. Maybe you are trying to say 'My expectation was blown away!'

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

March 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?


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When I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face.


WThe other day, when I slept ion the train the other day because I was very tired,. I felt something ion my face.

W The other day, when I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face.

Sleeping because your are tired sounds repetitive. It could be assumed that your are sleeping because you are tired so delete

When I slept iile I was sleeping on the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something ion my face.

When I I fell asleept i on the train the other day because I was very tired, and I felt something touching my face.

I fell asleep

I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek.


I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby was sitting next me. The baby touched my cheek.

I woke up with wonderingconfused and realized that athe baby sitting next me, touched my cheek.!

Is "wondering" a person? A noun? Or are you trying to say an emotion?

I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek.

{I woke up with wondering what had touched me | I startled awake} and realized that a baby sitting next meto me had touched my cheek.

My exhaustion was blown away!


My exhaustion was blown away!

Not sure what you mean by 'exhaustion' in this case. Maybe you are trying to say 'My expectation was blown away!'

My exhaustionI was blown away!

or "I was shocked", "I was so surprised", "I was dumbfounded"

My exhaustion was blown awayevaporated!

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