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He's called "Lord Voldemort" in English :)

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You mustshould at least check with your own eyes if the person you want to kill is dead or not.

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I'm not sure "fucking" works quite here! I'd replace "much" with "fucking" if you'd like to make it more colloquial :)

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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2

If you really want to kill him, finish him off properly.

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Try this: The first half of the last movie was spent in the forest, so I originally thought it was a mockumentary, but in this movie, the story progresses rhythmically and is full of highlights.

It was a very good family movie, and I think it was a good final movie.

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Typically sentences shouldn't start with 'but'. Try 'however'.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'fry'?

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'together' isn't necessary here, especially if you're not referencing multiple snakes.

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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Part 2

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Series seems like a plural noun but it's uncountable so we use the singular verb with it.

I also had a lot of conversations about Harry Potter with my friends, family, and relatives, and I was very glad to see the finale with the ideoriginal cast and almost no changes to them.

Thank you, Harry Potter.

If you really want to kill him, finish him off properly.

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You can also say " the first part"

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I think this is what you meant. Is 'small fry' an idiom in Japan?

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And this goes for all the villains in the movie, but: if you have the time, make sure you finish them off properly.

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I don't know what this means in context with the other sentences...

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I assume this is what you mean. If you think that Snape was "too cool" then that means you didn't like him.

It's not like "I love it as a movie!"

I kind of get what you mean by saying this. Are you saying that you don't necessarily like the movie but you do like the franchise and do to the series being precious to you, you still like it?

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