Jan. 1, 2025
Happy new year
I thought recently 2024 started ,but 2025 came soon. I feel a time flow is more quickly than when I was young.
I went to my parents house from 30th December to today. We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” at the night of the 31st. It was a peaceful night.
I wish 2025 will be a good year.
つい最近2024年になったばかりだと思っていたのにあっという間に2025年になってしまいました。若い時より時の流れが早く感じます。
12月30日から今日まで実家に帰っていました。私たちは鍋と刺身を食べて伝統的な音楽番組の紅白歌合戦を観ました。平和な夜でした。
2025年が良い年になる事を願っています。
I thought recently 2024 started ,but 2025 came soon.
Some more natural ways to express this idea:
"I feel like 2024 just started, but it's already 2025."
"The start of 2024 feels like just yesterday, and now it's already 2025."
"I can't believe how quickly 2024 passed!"
I feel a time flow is more quickly than when I was young.
We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” aton the night of the 31st.
I wishhope 2025 will be a good year.
"I wish that..." would also be okay, but "I hope" is more natural.
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Good job! A couple of sentences could be expressed more naturally, but I understand everything you are saying.
Jan. 2, 2025
Thank you ! I will practice writing English more!
Happy new year
I thoughtremember recently 2024 started ,but 2025 came soon.thinking "It's finally 2024" and yet before I realised it, it's already 2025.
Although the sentence you wrote is grammatically correct, the verb came is not usually used for inanimate things like years.
I feel a time flow is more quickly than when I was young. OR I feel the flow of time is much faster than when I was young¶
That's really true. Interestingly in English the order of the two nouns are swapped, instead of 時の流れ it's the flow of time. Also note that time flows as a verb is a more common expression.
I went to my parents house from 30th December to today.
We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” aton the night of the 31st.
It was a peaceful night.
I wishhope 2025 will be a good year.
This is a minor correction but hope is more frequently used.
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Good job overall!
Jan. 1, 2025
Thank you!
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I thought recently 2024 started ,but 2025 came soon. I Although the sentence you wrote is grammatically correct, the verb came is not usually used for inanimate things like years. I thought recently 2024 started ,but 2025 came soon. Some more natural ways to express this idea: "I feel like 2024 just started, but it's already 2025." "The start of 2024 feels like just yesterday, and now it's already 2025." "I can't believe how quickly 2024 passed!" |
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I feel a time flow is more quickly than when I was young. I feel That's really true. Interestingly in English the order of the two nouns are swapped, instead of 時の流れ it's the flow of time. Also note that time flows as a verb is a more common expression. I feel |
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I went to my parents house from 30th December to today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” at the night of the 31st. We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” We ate Japanese style stew , and sashimi and watched a traditional music program “紅白歌合戦” |
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It was a peaceful night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wish 2025 will be a good year. I This is a minor correction but hope is more frequently used. I "I wish that..." would also be okay, but "I hope" is more natural. |
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