Jan. 4, 2021
Happy New Year
From today, I have classes so my New Year Holidays are over. I've felt the holidays were too short. This is because I had activities with my friends and had assignments. Some of the professors gave me homework whose due date was about the end of last year. Therefore, I had to hand in them even during my holidays. I couldn't be relaxed when I had homework that its deadline was soon. These are bad New Years' presents for students.
FromStarting today, I have classes so my New Year Hholidays are over.
What you wrote is good but I think this is the more natural way to say it. Instead of 'so' you could also say "which means my New Year holidays"
I've felt tThe holidays werefelt too short.
This is because I had activities with my friends and had assignments.
Some of themy professors gave me homework whose due date was aboutnear the end of last year.
Therefore, I had to hand in them in even during my holidays.
I couldn't be relaxed when I had homework that itswhose deadline was so soon.
These are bad New Years' presents for students.
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Jan. 5, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Happy New Year |
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From today, I have classes so my New Year Holidays are over.
What you wrote is good but I think this is the more natural way to say it. Instead of 'so' you could also say "which means my New Year holidays" |
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I've felt the holidays were too short.
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This is because I had activities with my friends and had assignments. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of the professors gave me homework whose due date was about the end of last year. Some of |
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Therefore, I had to hand in them even during my holidays. Therefore, I had to hand |
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I couldn't be relaxed when I had homework that its deadline was soon. I couldn't be relaxed when I had homework |
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These are bad New Years' presents for students. These are bad New Year |
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