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Tammy

Feb. 12, 2025

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Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means We can watch the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol. I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice. It was sweet and had a special aroma.

As you can imagine, the full moon and Tangyuan汤圆 are both round. That's why this day has been given a good implication since thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

So, my friends, no matter where you are, I hope the Lantern Festival will be filled with happiness for you.

P.S.
I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/fZM-QdyPuoU
Please help me with the subtitles and dubbing, and give me some suggestions. Thanks in advance!


今天是中国的元宵节,也是农历新年的第十五天,这意味着如果天气好的话,全国各地都能看到满月。

在这一天,我们通常会吃汤圆或元宵,玩灯笼,并在晚饭后与家人一起赏会儿月。

我的家乡在华中地区,人们喜欢用酒酿煮汤圆,它是一种酒精含量约为2%的饮料。这顿晚饭我吃得太多了,一个汤圆也吃不下了,所以我就喝了一点酒酿。它甜甜的,有一种特殊的香气。

你可以想象得到,满月和汤圆都是圆的。所以几千年来,这一天就被赋予了美好的寓意——生活美满。

所以,我的朋友们,无论你身在何处,祝你元宵节幸福美满!

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Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watch the full moon all overfrom anywhere in our country if the weather is good enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family after dinner.

I ate too much thisfor supper and couldn't eat even one piece of Tangyuan anymore, s! So I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

That's why this day has been givenhad a good implicconnotation sincefor thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

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Great work !

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Tammy

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

Have a nice day!

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinesthe Nnew Yyear in China, which means Wwe can watchsee the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchappreciate the full moon with family after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.

I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

It was sweet and had a special aroma.

As you can imagine, the full moon and Tangyuan汤圆 are both round.

That's why this day has been given a good implication since thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

So, my friends, no matter where you are, I hope the Lantern Festival will be filled with happiness for you.

P.S.

I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/fZM-QdyPuoU Please help me with the subtitles and dubbing, and give me some suggestions.

Thanks in advance!

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元宵节快乐!

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Tammy

Feb. 14, 2025

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谢谢!

周末愉快!

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in Chinathe Sinosphere, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which. That means Wwe can watchsee/observe the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

LOGIC: In places such as Singapore or Korea this festival is also held.
Sinosphere --> 漢字文化圈

On this day, we typically eat Ttangyuan (filled rice balls) or Yyuanxiao (rice dumplings), play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family members after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Ttangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.

I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat one piece of Tangyuan anymoreany more tangyuan, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

It was sweet and had a special aroma.

As you can imagine, the full moon and Ttangyuan (汤圆) are both round.

So, my friends, no matter where you are, I hope the Lantern Festival will be filled with happiness for you.

P.S.

I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday.

Thanks in advance!

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Thanks for the video. I enjoyed it! One suggestion is to experiment with zoom in/zoom out effects a bit more. Otherwise, it was great!

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Tammy

Feb. 14, 2025

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谢谢您的修改和建议!

我下次尝试下zoom in & out。

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means We can watch the full moon awill over ourbe visible from everywhere in the country if the weather is goodclear enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchgaze at the full moon with family after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink (or alcoholic beverage) with about 2% alcohol.

I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat even one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice (wine? juice?).

It was sweet and had a special aroma.

As you can imagine, the full moon and Tangyuan汤圆 are both round.

That's why this day has been given a good implication since thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

So, my friends, no matter where you are, I hope the Lantern Festival will be filled with happiness for you.

P.S.

I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/fZM-QdyPuoU Please help me with the subtitles and dubbing, and give me some suggestions.

Thanks in advance!

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Well done!

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Tammy

Feb. 13, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of the Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watch the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with our family after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.

I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

It was sweet and had a special aroma.

That's why this day has been given a good implication since thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

P.S.

I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/fZM-QdyPuoU Please help me with the subtitles and dubbing, and give me some suggestions.

Thanks in advance!

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Thank you for your well wishes. Wishing you the same 🤗 and Happy Lantern Festival 🥮.

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Tammy

Feb. 13, 2025

4

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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Toluwani

Feb. 13, 2025

1

You are welcome :)

You too.

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watchsee the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

I would use "see" here instead of "watch". Watch implies that you are looking at something for a fairly long period and that the thing you are watching is doing something interesting. I'm not sure that's what is intended here.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchenjoy the full moon with family after dinner.

Again, I would avoid watch here. It would be different if the moon was doing something like "we watched the moon rise above the mountains".

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.

I ate too much athis supper and couldn't eat oneven one more piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

It was sweet and had a special aroma.

As you can imagine, the full moon and Tangyuan汤圆 are both round.

That's why this day has been given a good implication sincehad a positive significance for thousands of years ago - complete happiness in life.

So, my friends, no matter where you are, I hope the Lantern Festival will be filled with happiness for you.

P.S.

I uploaded a video about a hike on Sunday.

You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/fZM-QdyPuoU Please help me with the subtitles and dubbing, and give me some suggestions.

Thanks in advance!

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Great post! I made a few changes but they are details, to help you improve even further!

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Tammy

Feb. 12, 2025

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your thorough feedback and corrections each time.

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Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means We can watch the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.


Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watchsee the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

I would use "see" here instead of "watch". Watch implies that you are looking at something for a fairly long period and that the thing you are watching is doing something interesting. I'm not sure that's what is intended here.

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of the Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watch the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means We can watch the full moon awill over ourbe visible from everywhere in the country if the weather is goodclear enough.

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in Chinathe Sinosphere, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which. That means Wwe can watchsee/observe the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

LOGIC: In places such as Singapore or Korea this festival is also held. Sinosphere --> 漢字文化圈

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinesthe Nnew Yyear in China, which means Wwe can watchsee the full moon all over our country if the weather is good enough.

Today is the Spring Lantern Festival in China, as well as the fifteenth day of Chinese New Year which means Wwe can watch the full moon all overfrom anywhere in our country if the weather is good enough.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family after dinner.


On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchenjoy the full moon with family after dinner.

Again, I would avoid watch here. It would be different if the moon was doing something like "we watched the moon rise above the mountains".

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with our family after dinner.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchgaze at the full moon with family after dinner.

On this day, we typically eat Ttangyuan (filled rice balls) or Yyuanxiao (rice dumplings), play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family members after dinner.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watchappreciate the full moon with family after dinner.

On this day, we typically eat Tangyuan or Yuanxiao, play with lanterns, and watch the full moon with family after dinner.

In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.


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In my hometown, which is in central China, people like to cook Tangyuan with sweet fermented rice, a kind of drink with about 2% alcohol.

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I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.


I ate too much athis supper and couldn't eat oneven one more piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

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I ate too much this supper and couldn't eat even one piece of Tangyuan anymore, so I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice (wine? juice?).

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I ate too much thisfor supper and couldn't eat even one piece of Tangyuan anymore, s! So I just drank a little bit of sweet fermented rice.

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