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alexwong2164

June 30, 2022

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Happy birthday to me

Happy birthday to me

Just received a post card as a birthday card from one of internet friend.

I know her more than a year by now.

Because the virus I can’t go to Japan meet her.

Actually, in last two years I make a lot of Japan friends from internet.

Each day I send “interest” video them.

They all amaze that I know so many information about Japan.

Plus, information about other countries.

I even give a nickname “Talk-King” to myself.

From nobody become somebody.

This habit becoming to a job to me.

Sky is my limit, let’s see how high I can fly!

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JI just received a post card as a birthday cardpresent from one of my internet friends.

I've known her for more than a year by now.

Because of the virus, I can’t go to Japan to meet her.

Actually, in the last two years I makde a lot of Japanese friends fromon the internet.

Eachvery day I send interesting videos to them.

They're all amazed that I know so many informationthings about Japan, and about other countries.

Plus, information about other countries.

I even giave athe nickname “Talk-King” to myself.

From nobody become somebody.

Not too sure what you mean here, sorry.

This habit becomobby is turning into a job to me.

SThe sky is mythe limit, let’s see how high I can fly!

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Good job! You were able to express your thoughts well, just needed some grammar help :)

Happy birthday to me


Happy birthday to me


Just received a post card as a birthday card from one of internet friend.


JI just received a post card as a birthday cardpresent from one of my internet friends.

I know her more than a year by now.


I've known her for more than a year by now.

Because the virus I can’t go to Japan meet her.


Because of the virus, I can’t go to Japan to meet her.

Actually, in last two years I make a lot of Japan friends from internet.


Actually, in the last two years I makde a lot of Japanese friends fromon the internet.

Each day I send “interest” video them.


Eachvery day I send interesting videos to them.

They all amaze that I know so many information about Japan.


They're all amazed that I know so many informationthings about Japan, and about other countries.

Plus, information about other countries.


Plus, information about other countries.

I even give a nickname “Talk-King” to myself.


I even giave athe nickname “Talk-King” to myself.

From nobody become somebody.


From nobody become somebody.

Not too sure what you mean here, sorry.

This habit becoming to a job to me.


This habit becomobby is turning into a job to me.

Sky is my limit, let’s see how high I can fly!


SThe sky is mythe limit, let’s see how high I can fly!

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