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ohamu

March 5, 2025

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Happy birthday

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.
I presented my friend to the baby dress.
It was made by me!
Her baby is going to wear it when they go back home.
She will send photos to me.
I'm looking forward to see them.
I can’t wait it!

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My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

no need "at"

I presentedgave my friend to the baby dress.

you can also use the word "gave" here, no need "to"

It was made by me!

You can also say here, "I made it myself"

She will send photos to me.

you can also say so it can be more smooth "She will send me photos."

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

verb form, Since you used "looking forward" then the verb should also have "-ing"

I can’t wait it!

No need to put "it"

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Congratulations to your friend!

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ohamu

March 7, 2025

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Thank you so much!
I will tell her that you said congratulations.

Happy bBirthday

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

Don't need 'at'.

I presentedgave my friend to thea baby dress as a present.

You would not say 'to present' when talking about giving someone a gift.

It was made by me!

Her baby is going to wear it when they go back home.

She will send me some photos to me.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

Need the -ing form of the verb here.

I can’t wait it!

No 'it'.

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Good work.

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ohamu

March 5, 2025

1

Thank you so much.

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

I presented my friend to the baby dress to my friend.

It was made by me!

This is grammatically correct, but it would sound more natural to say "I made it!" instead.

Her baby is going to wear it when they go back home.

She will send photos to me.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

I can’t wait it!

I assume the "it" here refers to the act of receiving the pictures, or perhaps viewing them. So, you could say "I can't wait for it!", but that doesn't sound as natural as just saying "I can't wait!" or perhaps "I can't wait for that!" You could also be more specific, such as "I can't wait to see them!"

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ohamu

March 5, 2025

1

Thank you so much!
I understood to say more natural .

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

I presentedgave my friend to thea baby dress as a present.

1. I would use "gave" instead of "presented" in this sentence. "Presented" does mean to give, but does not necessarily mean that you are giving someone a present. We more commonly use the verb "to present" in formal ceremonies ("I'd like to present you with the award for best actor!") or when talking about sharing something for others to consider ("I presented the facts")
2. (Optional) You could make it more clear that the dress was a gift by adding "as a present" to the end of the sentence.

It was made by me!

Her baby is going to wear it when they goet back home.

"Go home" and "get home" are similar in meaning, but saying "get" emphasizes the point of arrival at the destination. If the baby will wear the dress during the journey home, "go" is correct. If the baby will wear the dress after arriving at home, use "get".

She will send photos to me.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

I can’t wait it!

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Great job! A handmade dress is a very thoughtful gift to give your friend.

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ohamu

March 5, 2025

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Thank you so much.
I understood the nuances of the words.
And I’m glad you said “very thoughtful gift”. I hope so.

Happy birthday


Happy bBirthday

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.


My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

Don't need 'at'.

My friend gave birth to a baby girl at two days ago.

no need "at"

I presented my friend to the baby dress.


I presentedgave my friend to thea baby dress as a present.

1. I would use "gave" instead of "presented" in this sentence. "Presented" does mean to give, but does not necessarily mean that you are giving someone a present. We more commonly use the verb "to present" in formal ceremonies ("I'd like to present you with the award for best actor!") or when talking about sharing something for others to consider ("I presented the facts") 2. (Optional) You could make it more clear that the dress was a gift by adding "as a present" to the end of the sentence.

I presented my friend to the baby dress to my friend.

I presentedgave my friend to thea baby dress as a present.

You would not say 'to present' when talking about giving someone a gift.

I presentedgave my friend to the baby dress.

you can also use the word "gave" here, no need "to"

It’s made by me!


Her baby is going to wear it when they go back home.


Her baby is going to wear it when they goet back home.

"Go home" and "get home" are similar in meaning, but saying "get" emphasizes the point of arrival at the destination. If the baby will wear the dress during the journey home, "go" is correct. If the baby will wear the dress after arriving at home, use "get".

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She will send photos to me.


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She will send me some photos to me.

She will send photos to me.

you can also say so it can be more smooth "She will send me photos."

I'm looking forward to see them.


I'm looking forward to seeing them.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

Need the -ing form of the verb here.

I'm looking forward to seeing them.

verb form, Since you used "looking forward" then the verb should also have "-ing"

I can’t wait it!


I can’t wait it!

I can’t wait it!

I assume the "it" here refers to the act of receiving the pictures, or perhaps viewing them. So, you could say "I can't wait for it!", but that doesn't sound as natural as just saying "I can't wait!" or perhaps "I can't wait for that!" You could also be more specific, such as "I can't wait to see them!"

I can’t wait it!

No 'it'.

I can’t wait it!

No need to put "it"

It was made by me!


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It was made by me!

This is grammatically correct, but it would sound more natural to say "I made it!" instead.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was made by me!

You can also say here, "I made it myself"

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