Dec. 17, 2020
Happinesss
Happiness has been brought into focus. Nowadays, some people hold an opinion of improving material life will increase people's feeling about happiness. In addition, when we satisfied with our material living, the incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness. Many reasons contribute to happiness.
Among the various reasons, people's satisfaction level plays an important role. That is to say, in the different stage of life, we will have various expectations about life quality. What is more, when we become more maturity, we will look for mental happiness rather than material happiness. As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot obtain by using money. However, you can get it by recalling the touching moment with your friends、your family, even though reading interesting books. The feeling you got named "happiness". As we know, mental happiness will last longer than material happiness. In a world, we should cherish our past experience or create present experience to enrich our mental world.
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In addition, when we are satisfied with our material livingwealth, theis incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness.
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Among the various things/reasons, are how people's satisfaction level plays an important role in their overall happiness.
That is to say, in theduring different stages of life, we will have various expectations about our expectation regarding our life quality.
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As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot be obtained by using money.
However, you can get it by recalling thea touching moment with your friends、your, family, and even though the simple act of reading an interesting books.
The feeling you got namfrom doing all these activities is called, "happiness".
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Happiness has been brought into focus.
Nowadays, some people hold anthe opinion ofthat improving material life will increase people's feeling abouts of happiness.
I would say "feelings of happiness" because I think you are trying to say that people's happiness increases. If that is the case, then it would be more natural to just leave the feelings out of the sentence altogether: "improving material life will increase people's happiness."
In addition, when we are satisfied with our material living, the incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness.
I am not sure what "incremental salary" means
I think you are trying to say that the "salary will not continue to contribute to our happiness", but I am not sure.
Among the various reasons, people's satisfaction level plays an important role.
That is to say, in the different stages of life, we will have various expectations about life quality.
What is more, when we become more maturitye, we will look for mental happiness rather than material happiness.
As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot be obtained by using money.
However, you can get it by recalling thea touching moment with your friends、 or your family, and even through reading interesting books.
The feeling you goet named "happiness".
This is not a complete sentence
In a world, we should cherish our past experience or create present experiences to enrich our mental world.
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Great job! A difficult topic because it is abstract.
Dec. 17, 2020
thank you
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Happiness has been brought into focus. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Nowadays, some people hold an opinion of improving material life will increase people's feeling about happiness. Nowadays, some people hold I would say "feelings of happiness" because I think you are trying to say that people's happiness increases. If that is the case, then it would be more natural to just leave the feelings out of the sentence altogether: "improving material life will increase people's happiness." Nowadays, some people hold |
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In addition, when we satisfied with our material living, the incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness. In addition, when we are satisfied with our material living, the incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness. I am not sure what "incremental salary" means I think you are trying to say that the "salary will not continue to contribute to our happiness", but I am not sure. In addition, when we are satisfied with our material |
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Many reasons contribute to happiness.
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Among the various reasons, people's satisfaction level plays an important role. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Among the various things/reasons, are how people's satisfaction level plays an important role in their overall happiness. |
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That is to say, in the different stage of life, we will have various expectations about life quality. That is to say, in That is to say, |
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What is more, when we become more maturity, we will look for mental happiness rather than material happiness. What is more, when we become more matur What is more |
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As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot obtain by using money. As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot be obtained by using money. As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot be obtained by using money. |
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However, you can get it by recalling the touching moment with your friends、your family, even though reading interesting books. However, you can get it by recalling However, you can get it by recalling |
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The feeling you got named "happiness". The feeling you g This is not a complete sentence The feeling you got |
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As we know, mental happiness will last longer than material happiness. |
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In a world, we should cherish our past experience or create present experience to enrich our mental world. In a wor In a world |
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