Obviously, certain economic conditions will givcan make us happinesser.

Not wrong, but sounds unnatural

People in situations thatwhere they can’t solve several necessary problems such as food, accommodation,… canmight think that their level of happiness has ais proportional relationship withto their economic well-being.

However, recently whenonce we solve the above problems and food or accommodation problem isare not a big problems anymore, after escaping from above problems then we may need to think about how to solve the problem of economic surplus.

Not so many people assume poor artists will be happy.

"Not so many" is used to emphasize that the amount of something is smaller than one might expect. I'd assume a lot of people would think that poor artists won't be happy.

InOn the other hand, not so many people want to become a rich but sad person.

To become happy, the important thing is that we live in an environment thatwhere we feel happy, and we may need to try our best to create these environment most of the timeis type of environment most of the time. / The most important thing to become happy is to live in an environment where we feel happy, and most of the time, we may need to try our best to create this type of environment.

When we understand clearly in which environment we feel happy, whether we're happy with someone and(else) or feel happy when doing our job, then finding happiness is not a challenge anymore.

Obviously, certain economic conditions will givcan make us happinesser.

People in situations that can’t solve several necessary problemWhen people are facing hardships such as food, accomodation,… can think that level ofnd housing security, they might feel that happiness has a proportional relationship with the economic prosperity.

However, recently when food or accomodation problem is not a big problem anymore, after escaping from above problems then we may need to think about how to solve when people's needs are met and they have escaped problems such as poverty, they may find that further economic surpluccess does not guarantee future happiness.

This sentence is a little unclear, I tried to make sense of the overall message of your post.

Not so many people assume that poor artists will be happy.

InOn the other hand, not so many people want to become a rich but sad person.

Finally, hHappiness is when we feel satisfied with our life and live in peace.

Because the other sentences afterwards also refer to happiness, I wouldn't say "finally" here.

To become happy, theachieve happiness, the most important thing is that we live in an environment that we feel happy, and we may need to try our best to create these environmentmakes us feel good. Creating a happy environment takes hard work and our best efforts most of the time.

I tried to give more emphasis to your message, that we have to work to achieve happiness and that it doesn't just happen because we think it should.

When we understand clearly in which environment we feel happy, happy with someone and feel happy when doing our job thenwhat it is about our environment, relationships, and workplace that make us happy, finding happiness is not longer a challenge anymore.

In other way, when we have some excess money, how we live and use that money in what case isHow we use our disposable income and how we choose to live are important.

Of coIt is important to make surse when enjoying the surplus doesn’that we use our extra money in ways that don't affect other people’s happiness. happiness of other people.

You might want to include some examples of how spending without thinking could affect other people to make your message even stronger.

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happiness has a propotional relationship withis related to their economic. situation.

However, recently when food or accomodation problem is not a big problem anymore, after escaping from above problems then we may need to think about how to solve the economic surplusthey may need to think about how having more money makes them happier.

Not so many people assumeFew people think that poor artists will be happy.

InOn the other hand, not so manyfew people want to become a rich but sad person.yet unhappy people.

Finally, hHappiness is a state whenre we feel satisfied with our life andwhich allows us to live in peace.

To become happy, the most important thing is that we live ino create an environment that we feel happy, and we mayallows us to be happy. We need to try our best to create these environment most of the timefind this environment.

When we understand clearly in which environments we feel happy, happy with someone and feel happy when doing our job thenthen finding happiness iswill not a challenge anymorebe difficult.

In other wayHowever, when we have some excess money, how we live and use that money in what case is important.

Of course, when enjoying the surplus doesn’t affect other people’s happiness.e need to make sure enjoying the extra money does not change the happiness of other people.