Jan. 7, 2022
Hanging clothes
He takes the clothes out where the washing lines are. He's got all kinds of clothes, and he always hangs them in order . Baby bodies in one place underpants in some other place, sweaters, pants, etc.
Can you pass me that peg? He tells to his mom, pointing to the pegs box.
Don't be so picky with clothes? Next time you'll be hanging them by date of purchase. said his mom humorously.
Picky is my last name and I´m OK with it. said Kyle proudly.
<p>I´m not sure if body is the right name for the piece of clothing but i´m attaching a picture just in case</p>
Hanging clothes
He takes the clothes out where the washing lines are.
He's got all kinds of clothes, and he always hangs them in order .
Baby bodonsies in one place underpants in some other place, sweaters, pants, etc.
Baby bodies!? I hope that is a mistake 💀
"Can you pass me that peg?"
He tells toasks his mom, pointing to the pegs box.
"Don't be so picky with clothes?!
Next time you'll be hanging them by date of purchase.,"
said his mom humorously.
"jokingly" or "teasingly" might be better.
"Picky is my last name and I´m OK with it."
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Jan. 7, 2022
@Bethany you don´t know how thankful I´m for your help. 🙏🏻
Jan. 17, 2022
Baby bodonsies in one place underpants in some other place, sweaters, pants, etc.
Haha now I see what you mean. Hannibal Lecter💀. What a mistake!!!🤪
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He takes the clothes out where the washing lines are. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He's got all kinds of clothes, and he always hangs them in order . He's got all kinds of clothes, and he always hangs them in order |
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Baby bodies in one place underpants in some other place, sweaters, pants, etc. Baby Baby bodies!? I hope that is a mistake 💀 |
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Can you pass me that peg? "Can you pass me that peg?" |
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He tells to his mom, pointing to the pegs box. He |
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Don't be so picky with clothes? "Don't be so picky with clothes |
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Next time you'll be hanging them by date of purchase. Next time you'll be hanging them by date of purchase |
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said his mom humorously. said his mom humorously. "jokingly" or "teasingly" might be better. |
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Picky is my last name and I´m OK with it. "Picky is my last name and I´m OK with it." |
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said Kyle proudly. |
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