May 23, 2025
Haneda Airport (123)
Something happened at Haneda Airport.
This is a story happened at the airport when I went to New York in March.
My friend and I had lunch at a food court at the airport before boarding.
The food court was very crowed.
When we were looking for a table an American guy told us that we could share the table that he was sitting.
He was using the table by himself and the other three chairs weren't taken.
So we were happy to accept his offer.
He was friendly, talkative, and told us that he had come to Japan for his honeymoon.
After a while his wife came up to the table and talked to him, but she went to another table.
Maybe, she wasn't comfortable to share the table with strangers.
Her husband went to her table, so we just said "Thank you" when he was leaving.
After that a Chinese woman was looking for a table and we told her we could share the table.
To be continued...
羽田空港で、面白いことがありました。
私は、3月にニューヨークへ行きました。これはその時の羽田空港での話です。
友達と私は、飛行機に乗る前にフードコートで昼食を取りました。
そのフードコートはとても混んでいました。
私達が、テーブルを探していると、あるアメリカ人の男性が、良かったらこのテーブルシェアしていいよ、と言いました。
彼は、そのテーブルに一人で座っていて他の三つは空いていました。
だから私たちは、喜んでそこに座ることにしました。
彼は、とてもフレンドリーで、おしゃべりで、ハネムーンで日本に来たと話してくれました。
しばらくして、彼の奥さんがテーブルに来て、彼と何か話して、別のテーブルに行ってしまいました。
たぶん彼女は知らない人とテーブルを一緒にシェアするのが嫌だったんだと思います。
そのアメリカ人男性も彼女のテーブルに移動しました。私達は、「ありがとう」とだけ言いました。
その後、中国人の女性が私たちのテーブルの前で空いているテーブルを探していたので、「ここどうぞ」と伝えました。
つづく。。。
This is a story about whathappened at the airport when I went to New York in March.
When we were looking for a table an American guy told us that we could share the table that he was sitting at.
Or share his table
Maybe, she wasn't comfortable to shareing the table with strangers.
Her husband went to her table, so we just said "Thank you" whenas he was leaving.
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May 23, 2025
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Haneda Airport
Something happened at Haneda Airport.
This is a story about something that happened at the airport when I went to New York in March.
My friend and I had lunch at athe food court at the airport before boarding.
The food court was very crowed.
Whilen we were looking for a table, an American guyman told us that we could share the table that he was sitting at.
He was using the tablsitting alone by himself and the other three chairs weren't takenoccupied.
So we were happy to accept his offer.
He was friendly, talkative, and told us that he had come to Japan for his honeymoon.
After a while his wife came up to the table and talked to him, but she went to another table.
Maybe, she wasn't comfortable to share the table with strangers.
Her husband went to her table, so we just said "Thank you" when he was leaving.
After that a Chinese woman was looking for a table and we told her wthat she could share theour table.
To be continued...
May 23, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Haneda Airport
Something happened at Haneda Airport.
This is a story of something that happened at the airport when I went to New York in March.
My friend and I had lunch at a food court at the airport before boarding (the plane).
The reader can probably infer that by "boarding", you meant "boarding the plane", but if you want to eliminate any possibility of misinterpretation (perhaps it could refer to "boarding a bus"), you can consider making this explicit.
The food court was very crowded.
Whilen we were looking for a table, an American guy told us that we could share the table that he was sitting at.
(1) "When" is fine, but "while" might sound more appropriate.
(2) I'd suggest the addition of a comma.
He was using the table by himself and the other three chairs weren't taken.
So we were happy to accept his offer.
He was friendly, talkative, and told us that he had come to Japan for his honeymoon.
After a while his wife came up to the table and talked to him, but then she went to another table.
The addition of "then" can help further convey that this is a sequence of events.
Maybe, she wasn't comfortable to shareing the table with strangers.
The comma is unnecessary and unnatural; it breaks the flow of the sentence in an awkward place.
Her husband went to her table, so we just said "Thank you" when he was leaving.
After that we saw a Chinese woman was looking for a table and we told her we could share the table.
I tweaked the sentence a little to sound more natural.
To be continued...
May 23, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanation!
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