April 5, 2020
Hand Massage
I checked about hand massage on the internet today. I'll share with you what I learned.
It is said that foot is the second heart and hand is the second brain.
Massaging hands promotes good blood circulation and removes the tense of the muscles, and then makes you relax. When you relax, stress will be removed from your brain, consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
今日、ハンドマッサージについてネットで調べてみました。わかったことを皆さんに共有しようと思います。
足は第二の心臓、手は第二の脳と言われるそうです。手をマッサージすると、血行促進し、筋肉の緊張をとり、リラックスできるそうです。
リラックスすると脳のストレスが解消され、免疫力が上がるそうです。😄
Hand Massage
I checkeread about hand massageing on the internet today.
The corrections by others are equally correct, but this is an alternative.
I'll share with you what I learned.
It is said that the foot is the second heart and the hand is the second brain.
Massaging your hands promotes good blood circulation and, removes the tenseion of theyour muscles, and then makcauses you to relax.
A properly constructed English sentence should not have two ’and’s in it. Instead, replace the first ’and’ with a comma. Additionally, commas are not used before a conjunction, such as ’and.’ Particularly not in lists. But even native speakers often make these mistakes! I actually point put these things to beginning writers all the time as a part of my writing tutoring. They are very common mistakes.
When you relax, stress will be removed fromis reduced on your brain, and consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
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Good job again!
April 7, 2020
When you relax, stress will be removed fromis reduced on your brain, and consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
Don’t forget that commas don’t come before conjunctions! ; )
See Shiera? Even native speakers make this mistake!
April 8, 2020
Sorry! I’ll give some examples right now.
You sentence is correct in respect to what we have been discussing, but you should write ‘and stretched _my_ arms yesterday.” The only thing wrong though is the lack of the possessive pronoun ‘me.’
So I believe the rule is only about ’and.’
Examples:
He went swimming and I played games. CORRECT
He went swimming, and I played games. INCORRECT
He went swimming, while I played games. CORRECT
He went swimming, but I played games. CORRECT
Does that help at all?
Hand Massage
I checkeread about hand massage on the internet today.
It is said that the foot is the second heart and the hand is the second brain.
Massaging hands promotes good blood circulation and, removes the tense of the musclesmuscle tension, and then makelps you relax.
When listing down things, all of them are separated by commas until the last one which is then finalised by 'and'.
When you relax, stress will be removed from your brain,levels will reduce, and consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
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Well done!
It's always good to practice hand massage and stretches to make sure it won't get stiff! Be careful over your health!
April 6, 2020
Thank you for correcting! I tried a hand massage and stretched arms yesterday, and found that I fell asleep easily. I'll continue this massage. ^^
April 7, 2020
When you relax, stress will be removed from your brain,levels will reduce, and consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
Don’t forget that commas don’t come before conjunctions! ; )
See Shiera? Even native speakers make this mistake!
April 7, 2020
Shoul I write, “I tried a hand massage and stretched arms yesterday. I found that I fell asleep easily. ”?
Is my understanding okay?
April 7, 2020
It woul be helpful if you could show some examples so that I could tell the difference. Sorry, I don't understand only with word's explanations😌
April 8, 2020
Sorry! I’ll give some examples right now.
You sentence is correct in respect to what we have been discussing, but you should write ‘and stretched _my_ arms yesterday.” The only thing wrong though is the lack of the possessive pronoun ‘me.’
So I believe the rule is only about ’and.’
Examples:
He went swimming and I played games. CORRECT
He went swimming, and I played games. INCORRECT
He went swimming, while I played games. CORRECT
He went swimming, but I played games. CORRECT
Does that help at all?
April 9, 2020
Oh yes!! I understand it now. Than you very much!!
I checkeread about hand massages on the internet today.
I'll share with you what I learned.
It is said that the foot is the second heart and that the hand is the second brain.
Massaging the hands promotes good blood circulation and removlaxes the tense of the muscles, and then makelps you relax.
When you relax, stress will be removed from your brain,you will experience less stress and consequently, your immune system will improve.😄
April 6, 2020
Than you for correcting!
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