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Sept. 5, 2022

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Hamamatsu Gyoza

I went to Hamamatsu city with the train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.
For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local food.
When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restraint clerk said you can not order that by one person, then I once gave up.
This time, I asked the clark to whether if I could be able to order it, then took seat.
I heard that the circle can be made from 21 pieces.
I worried to be able to eat all, but I could do it.
I'm happy that my wish came true.

Here's same sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&sxsrf=ALiCzsaCpQXpBBMpmhOhoLjE9hvTmaCSIA:1662390250872&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjkg4aj9v35AhUFm1YBHel9Cf4Q_AUoAnoECAEQBA&biw=1352&bih=818&dpr=2


以前の日記で書いた18きっぷで、浜松に行ってきました。
お昼に浜松のB級グルメとして有名な浜松餃子を食べました。

はじめてに行った時、餃子を円のように並べてあるのを食べたかったのですが、1人では頼めないと言われて諦めたことがありました。
今回は店に入った時に注文できるか聞いてから席に座りました。
円にできるのは21個からだそうで、食べられるか心配でしたが、大丈夫でした。
念願叶って嬉しいです。

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Hamamatsu Gyoza

I went to Hamamatsu cCity with the “18 Kippu” train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.

For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local foodspecialty.

名物 = local specialty

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can nothat I couldn't order that byit for one person, then I once gave upso I gave up at once.

This time, I asked the claerk to whether if I cwould be able to order it, and then took a seat.

I heard that the circle can be made from 21 pieces.

I was worried to be able toabout whether I could eat all of it, but I could do it.

I'm happy that my wish came true.

Here's sa are some sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&sxsrf=ALiCzsaCpQXpBBMpmhOhoLjE9hvTmaCSIA:1662390250872&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjkg4aj9v35AhUFm1YBHel9Cf4Q_AUoAnoECAEQBA&biw=1352&bih=818&dpr=2

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美味しそう!浜松餃子を食べてよかった。よく出来ました!

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milkyway

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thank you for always correcting me.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restraint clerk said you can not order that byfor just one person, then I onceso I gave up.

This time, I asked the claerk to whether ifor not I cwould be able to order it, then took a seat.

I worried if I was going to be able to eat all, but I could do it.

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milkyway

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Hamamatsu Gyoza

I went to Hamamatsu city with the train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.

For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local food.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can not order that byfor just one person, then I onceso I gave up.

I wasn't sure on the last part of this sentence, does this seem correct?

Also it is more common to see "waiter" or "host/hostess" when talking about restaurant staff. The host (or sometimes hostess if it is a woman) stands at the front, the waiter brings the food and later the check.

This time, I asked the (claerk to/waiter) whether if I coulor not I'd be able to order it, then took a seat.

I heard that the circle can be made from 21 pieces.

I worried I would noto be able to eat it all, but I could dodid it.

I'm happy that my wish came true.

Here's same sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&sxsrf=ALiCzsaCpQXpBBMpmhOhoLjE9hvTmaCSIA:1662390250872&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjkg4aj9v35AhUFm1YBHel9Cf4Q_AUoAnoECAEQBA&biw=1352&bih=818&dpr=2

Fun fact, you can usually trim internet URLs on ampersands (&). This brings you to the same page:
https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&tbm=isch

Sorry, this is a little nerdy and not important at all :)

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Nice work! The gyoza look incredible. I wish I could order them here.

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martin_pescador

Sept. 5, 2022

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Oops, this correction is right. I missed it in my corrections and can't edit it anymore.

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milkyway

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections. They are very useful.

Hamamatsu Gyoza

I went to Hamamatsu city with the train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.

For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local food.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can not order that bymany by yourself/for one person, then I onceso I gave up.

This time, I asked the claerk to whether if I could be able to order it, then took a seat.

I heard that the circle can be made fromup of 21 pieces.

Yours is understandable, but this is more correct

I worried I wouldn'to be able to eat it all, but I could do itmanaged.

I'm happy that my wish came true.

Here's sare some sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

martin_pescador's avatar
martin_pescador

Sept. 5, 2022

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Here's sare some sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

Oops, this correction is right. I missed it in my corrections and can't edit it anymore.

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milkyway

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Hamamatsu Gyoza


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I went to Hamamatsu city with the train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.


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I went to Hamamatsu cCity with the “18 Kippu” train ticket “18 Kippu”, which I wrote about it in my previous post.

For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local food.


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For lunch, I ate Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings, which are famous as Hamamatsu's local foodspecialty.

名物 = local specialty

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restraint clerk said you can not order that by one person, then I once gave up.


When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can not order that bymany by yourself/for one person, then I onceso I gave up.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can not order that byfor just one person, then I onceso I gave up.

I wasn't sure on the last part of this sentence, does this seem correct? Also it is more common to see "waiter" or "host/hostess" when talking about restaurant staff. The host (or sometimes hostess if it is a woman) stands at the front, the waiter brings the food and later the check.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restraint clerk said you can not order that byfor just one person, then I onceso I gave up.

When I went to Hamamatsu the first time, I wanted to eat Hamamatsu gyoza dumplings arranged in a circle, but the restauraint clerk said you can nothat I couldn't order that byit for one person, then I once gave upso I gave up at once.

This time, I asked the clark to whether if I could be able to order it, then took seat.


This time, I asked the claerk to whether if I could be able to order it, then took a seat.

This time, I asked the (claerk to/waiter) whether if I coulor not I'd be able to order it, then took a seat.

This time, I asked the claerk to whether ifor not I cwould be able to order it, then took a seat.

This time, I asked the claerk to whether if I cwould be able to order it, and then took a seat.

I heard that the circle can be made from 21 pieces.


I heard that the circle can be made fromup of 21 pieces.

Yours is understandable, but this is more correct

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I worried to be able to eat all, but I could do it.


I worried I wouldn'to be able to eat it all, but I could do itmanaged.

I worried I would noto be able to eat it all, but I could dodid it.

I worried if I was going to be able to eat all, but I could do it.

I was worried to be able toabout whether I could eat all of it, but I could do it.

I'm happy that my wish came true.


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Here's same sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.


Here's sare some sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

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Here's sa are some sample pictures of Hamamatsu gyoza.

https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&sxsrf=ALiCzsaCpQXpBBMpmhOhoLjE9hvTmaCSIA:1662390250872&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjkg4aj9v35AhUFm1YBHel9Cf4Q_AUoAnoECAEQBA&biw=1352&bih=818&dpr=2


https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&sxsrf=ALiCzsaCpQXpBBMpmhOhoLjE9hvTmaCSIA:1662390250872&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjkg4aj9v35AhUFm1YBHel9Cf4Q_AUoAnoECAEQBA&biw=1352&bih=818&dpr=2

Fun fact, you can usually trim internet URLs on ampersands (&). This brings you to the same page: https://www.google.com/search?q=%E6%B5%9C%E6%9D%BE%E9%A4%83%E5%AD%90&tbm=isch Sorry, this is a little nerdy and not important at all :)

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