Dec. 7, 2020
Hair
When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips). I used to cut my hair, just the ends, once a year. When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail. I started gradually cutting it more and more. First, up to my waist. Then, up to my chest. Later, a bit below my shoulders. Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length). My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer. They are just joking, they like my hair like this.
Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter! I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable. I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it. And if I regret it, it'll grow back. Haircuts are not that big of a deal, I don't get why people think it's life altering. Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.
If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to do it. Life is one and hair grows.
Hair
When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips).
I used to cut my hair, justtrim the ends, once a year.
I understand what you mean from the original sentence but this is more natural in my opinion
When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail.
I started gradually cutting it more and morto cut it little by little.
First, up to my waist.
Then, up to my chest.
Later, a bit below my shoulders.
Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length).
My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer., but
Tthey are just joking, t. They like my hair like this.
I recommend combining these two sentences
Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter!
I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (though I don't think haircuts should have a gender).
I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable.
I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it.
And if I regret it, it'll grow back.
Haircuts are not that big of a deal, so I don't get why people think it's life altering.
The sentence was correct without this but I think it flows more naturally this way
Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.
If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dareare afraid to/hesitating/second guessing yourself, I encourage you to do it.
Life is oneshort and hair grows.
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Great work! I hope you like the haircut if you decide to go through with it :) have you ever gotten bangs?
Dec. 8, 2020
Thank you! Yes, I got side bangs when I was in middle school. My mum says they looked good on me. I, on the other had, don't think they suited me that well, but still don't hate the way they looked (I liked them back then).
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I used to cut my hair, just the ends,trim the ends of my hair once a year.
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So I started to gradually cutting it more and more it.
First, I cut it up to my waist.
Then, I cut it up to my chest.
Later, a biI cut it just below my shoulders.
Finally, I got a bob cut (that is a bit longer than chin length).
My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer, but they ....
They.... are just joking, since they like my hair like this.
Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter!
I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut", although (I don't think haircuts should have a gender).
I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable.
I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it.
And if I regret it, it'll always grow back.
Haircuts are not that big of a deal,. I don't get why people think it's life altering.
Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows back.
ISo, if you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to dotry it.
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Dec. 7, 2020
Thank you!
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When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips). When I was a little girl, my hair was very long This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to cut my hair, just the ends, once a year. I used to I used to I understand what you mean from the original sentence but this is more natural in my opinion |
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When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail.
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I started gradually cutting it more and more. So I started to gradually cut I started |
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Then, up to my chest. Then, I cut it up to my chest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length). Finally, I got a bob This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer. My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer, but they .... My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer |
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They are just joking, they like my hair like this.
I recommend combining these two sentences |
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Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut", although I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (though I don't think haircuts should have a gender). |
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I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.
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If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to do it.
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Life is one and hair grows.
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