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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.

I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no one of the trees.

This makes me think of the past while I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.

Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.

The environment inside the community was really nice. Many various trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

I remember taking some photos there. Let me check and share it with you guys.

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March 18, 2022

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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.

Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.

The environment inside the community was really nice.

I remember taking some photos there.

Let me check and share it with you guys.

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March 18, 2022

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I suddenly realized oh, it wa's already been spring for a time, but I hadven't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no are none of the trees.

Tricky tenses in this sentance.

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March 18, 2022

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The environment inside the community was really nice.

I remember taking some photos there.

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March 18, 2022

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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments athat the cherry tree wass are blossoming.

I changed this because all of the trees are starting to blossom, not just one, even if there was only one tree in the photo you saw.

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One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.


One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments athat the cherry tree wass are blossoming. One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments that the cherry trees are blossoming.

I changed this because all of the trees are starting to blossom, not just one, even if there was only one tree in the photo you saw.

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I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no one of the trees.


I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a timethat spring has already started, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming yet this spring because along my wayroute to work, there wasare no one of thecherry trees. I suddenly realized that spring has already started, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming yet this spring because along my route to work, there are no cherry trees.

I suddenly realized oh, it wa's already been spring for a time, but I hadven't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no are none of the trees. I suddenly realized oh, it's already been spring for a time, but I haven't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there are none of the trees.

Tricky tenses in this sentance.

I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there wasare no one of the treestrees like that. I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there are no trees like that.

This makes me think of the past while I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.


This makes me think of the past while, back when I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment. This makes me think of the past, back when I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.

This makes me think of the past whilen I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment. This makes me think of the past when I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.

Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.


Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan rRoad was the residential community of staff working in at the Fuyang power bureau. Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment on the other side of Yingnan Road was the residential community of staff working in at the Fuyang power bureau.

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The environment inside the community was really nice.


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Many various trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.


Many varioustypes of trees and flowers were well managed, and I often took a walks there to enjoy the beautiful scenery. Many types of trees and flowers were well managed, and I often took walks there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

Many variouseties of trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery. Many varieties of trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

You could also say "many trees" or "various trees"

I remember taking some photos there.


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Let me check and share it with you guys.


Let me check and share ithem with you guys. Let me check and share them with you guys.

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