Jan. 15, 2024
Kevin's English Room （17）
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is the continuation from my last post.
They often introduce American snacks and it always interesting for me.
I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised having so much amount of crackers.
I couldn't find just right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn"
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tasty.
私は「Kevin's English Room」と言うYouTubeチャンネルが好きで、」これは、昨日の投稿の続きです。
彼らはよくアメリカのお菓子を紹介してくれて、それはほんとに、私にとって面白いです。
私は、彼らの紹介してくれたお菓子を時々オンラインで注文します。
「ゴールドフィッシュ」と言うクラッカーを注文した時は、あまりにもたくさんの量のクラッカーが届いてびっくりしました。
アマゾンでちょうどいい量のものが見つかりませんでした。
ゴールドフィッシュは、超一流のお菓子っていうわけじゃないけど、まあまあ美味しかったです。
今日見た動画の中で、彼らはFritosと言うチップスを紹介していました。
今、これがめっちゃ食べてみたいです。
彼らは、これは、日本の「とんがりコーン」に似てるって言いました。
Kevin以外の二人の男性は「とんがりコーン」の方が美味しいと言ってました。
だから、どっちがおいしいか確かめたいです。
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Kevin's English Room （17）
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room," and this is thea continuation from my last post.
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room," and this is a continuation from my last post.
Theyree YouTubers named Kevin, Kake, and Yama often introduce American snacks, and it is always interesting for me.
Three YouTubers named Kevin, Kake, and Yama often introduce American snacks, and it is always interesting for me.
I think it would be good to introduce the names of the YouTubers here.
I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised having so muchby the amount of crackers in each bag.
When I received "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised by the amount of crackers in each bag.
I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon. I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin
Kake and Yama said that Tongari Corn is better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
Kake and Yama said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tastyier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
Jan. 16, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! You have watched Kevin's English Room since you know their name! Do you like their channel? I think it's good for Japanese learners because there are Japanese subtitles, and also you can learn natural Japanese phrases. Thank you as always!
Jan. 16, 2024
No problem!
Yeah, I like their channel. :) Their videos are a bit advanced for beginner or intermediate Japanese learners like me, but they're still very interesting, and I certainly still learn new things from them.
Jan. 16, 2024
Good to here!
Kevin's English Room （17）
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is the continuation from my last post.
They often introduce American snacks and it's always interesting for me. They often introduce American snacks and it's always interesting for me.
I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised having so much amountany of crackers.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised having so many of crackers.
Countable nouns (like crackers, ie when you add "s" to the noun) - MANY crackers, the NUMBER of crackers
Uncountable nouns (like water, ie when you don't add "s" even when there's lots of it) - MUCH water, the AMOUNT of water
I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon. I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish crackers might not be top tier, but they were pretty good. The Goldfish crackers might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn"
The two."
The guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tastyier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
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Fun to read as always! I personally don't think there are Americans snacks that are tastier than what Japan already has.
Kevin's English Room
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is the continuation from my last post. I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is the continuation from my last post.
Better: "This is a continuation from my last post about a YouTube channel I like, "Kevin's English Room."
They often introduce American snacks and it's always interesting for me. They often introduce American snacks and it's always interesting for me.
I often order snacks online that I sawee on their channel online.
I often order snacks online that I see on their channel.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised having so much(to have so many /at the amount of) crackers.
When I received "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised (to have so many /at the amount of) crackers.
I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon. I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tastyier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
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Fritos are very good, but very salty! I usually eat them with taco meat and other toppings. We call it a "walking taco" in my home state. It's very delicious that way. Goldfish are usually a snack that children in elementary school eat. My recommended American snack is Cheez-Its! They are delicious, cheesy, and not too salty.
Jan. 15, 2024
Cheez-Its! I've been always curious about it. I saw it on their same video. I'll definitely try to get it. Thank you for your recommendation.
and thank you for your correction!
They often introduce American snacks and it always interesting fors me.
They often introduce American snacks and it always interests me.
I often order snacks that I sawee on their channel online.
I often order snacks that I see on their channel online.
When I received the crackersordered "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised having so much amount of crackers.by the amount I received.
When I ordered "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised by the amount I received.
I couldn't find just the right amount of themI wanted on Amazon.
I couldn't find just the right amount I wanted on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn"
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The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tasty.ier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
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I watch Kevin's English Room too!
Fritos are okay. They're very salty!
You should check out the Youtube channel "Akari in Texas." She is a Japanese woman living in America and she makes videos on various American snacks and foods.
Great essay!!
Jan. 15, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction and recommendation. I'll look up the channel and watch it! I think I have to watch it lol.
They often introduce American snacks and it is always interesting for me. They often introduce American snacks and it is always interesting for me.
I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online. I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised at having so much a large amount of crackers.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised at having such a large amount of crackers.
In the US and Canada you could also just say "I received the Goldfish crackers". They're a common enough brand name to be used to describe a type of cracker.
I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon. I couldn't find just the right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good. The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
Now I really want to try it.them.
Now I really want to try them.
For some reason it sounds better to me to use a plural. I'm not sure if it's a grammatical rule, but I guess because the snack has multiple pieces.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn"
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The two guys apart fromother than Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn" .
The two guys other than Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tastyier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
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The "Xtra Cheesy Pizza" Golfish are very tasty. I think they're better than the original Goldfish flavor.
Jan. 15, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction and recommendation! I'd like to try the Extra Cheesy Pizza Goldfish!
Kevin's English Room
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is thea continuation ofrom my last post.
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is a continuation of my last post.
They often introduce American snacks and, which its always interesting for me.
They often introduce American snacks, which is always interesting for me.
I often order snacks that I sawee on their channel online.
I often order snacks that I see on their channel online.
"See" here is in the persent tense because it's a habitual sense, even though you'd use the past tense in Japanese. I can't really explain why we make this difference, though...
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised having so muchby the amount of crackers.
When I received the "Goldfish" crackers, I was surprised by the amount of crackers.
I couldn't find just the right amount (of them) on Amazon. I couldn't find just the right amount (of them) on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it/them. Now I really want to try it/them.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is/was better.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn."
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is/was better.
Here, you could use "was" to match "said" for an indirect quote.
I'd like to see which is tastyier.
I'd like to see which is tastier.
Feedback
Goldfish has a lot of flavors. I really like the "flavor blasted" ones, but some people might think they're too salty.
As for Fritos... They're okay. A lot of people love them, but I don't get the hype haha.
My favorite snack: Doritos, Cool Ranch flavor. Amazing.
Jan. 15, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction and your recommendation! I'll look up flavor blasted Goldfish and Doritos, Cool Ranch flavor.
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