Dec. 28, 2022
Writing Challenge, Day 88
Today is the 88th day of my daily English challenge. My sister and I went to the supermarket. we bought cheese, milk, yogurt,chocolate,biscuits. Then I went to another store to buy the games for my nieces and my nephew.
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watch some videos of recepices. I'd like to prepare and variety of foods to my nephew and my nieces.
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Writing Challenge, Day 88
Today is the 88th day of my daily English challenge.
My sister and I went to the supermarket.
wWe bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
We bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
Then I went to another store to buy the games for my nieces and my nephew.
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watching some videos of recepicipes.
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watching some videos of recipes.
I'd like to prepare and variety of foods tofor my nephew and my nieces.
I'd like to prepare a variety of foods for my nephew and my nieces.
Writing Challenge, Day 88
Today is the 88th day of my daily English challenge.
My sister and I went to the supermarket.
wWe bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
We bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
Then I went to another store to buy the games for my nieces and my nephew.
Then I went to another store to buy games for my nieces and nephew.
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watching some videos of recepicfor new recipes.
In the afternoon, I spent my time watching some videos for new recipes.
I'd like to prepare and variety of foods to for my nephew and my nieces.
I'd like to prepare a variety of food for my nephew and nieces.
Remember, "food" is an uncountable noun.
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Good work!
Dec. 29, 2022
Thank you Marie.
wWe bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
We bought cheese, milk, yogurt, chocolate, and biscuits.
"and" for the last element in the enumeration
Then I went to another store to buy the games / games for my nieces and my nephew. Then I went to another store to buy the games / games for my nieces and my nephew.
"the games" = when you had precise games in mind
"games" = more general, you went to the store to look for games to buy
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watching some videos of recepicipes.
In the afternoon, I spent my time watching some videos of recipes.
"watching" = present participle. The activity of watchign TV lasted some time
I'd like to prepare and variety of foods tofor my nephew and my nieces.
I'd like to prepare a variety of foods for my nephew and my nieces.
"for" is better here
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Good job, keep up the good work !
Dec. 29, 2022
Thank you so much!
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Today is the 88th day of my daily English challenge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My sister and I went to the supermarket. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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we bought cheese, milk, yogurt,chocolate,biscuits.
"and" for the last element in the enumeration
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Then I went to another store to buy the games for my nieces and my nephew. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then I went to another store to buy the games / games for my nieces and my nephew. Then I went to another store to buy the games / games for my nieces and my nephew. "the games" = when you had precise games in mind "games" = more general, you went to the store to look for games to buy
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In the afternoon, I spent my time to watch some videos of recepices.
In the afternoon, I spent my time "watching" = present participle. The activity of watchign TV lasted some time
In the afternoon, I spent my time
In the afternoon, I spent my time to watching some videos of rec |
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I'd like to prepare and variety of foods to my nephew and my nieces.
I'd like to prepare a "for" is better here
I'd like to prepare a Remember, "food" is an uncountable noun.
I'd like to prepare a |
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