yesterday
My wallpaper
My wallpaper on my phone is Dona from Mamamia. It's a beautiful photography of Dona in the middle of a crowd. I love this picture because she dance, shine, she's free, we only notice her. I've always loved Dona very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. Mamamia is my confort movie so I love see her on my phone everyday for remind me who i want to be.
Correction Settings
MyThe wallpaper on my phone is Donna from Mamama Mia.
The wallpaper on my phone is Donna from Mamma Mia.
We don't need to use 'my' twice
It's a beautiful photography of Donna in the middle of a crowd.
It's a beautiful photograph of Donna in the middle of a crowd.
Photography is the activity, Photograph is the picture
I love this picture because she is danceing, shine, she'sing and free, w. We only notice her.
I love this picture because she is dancing, shining and free. We only notice her.
You could combine this into 1 sentence like this but it's a bit odd
I've always loved Donna very much, because she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I've always loved Donna very much, because she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent.
I would break this into two sentences but technically this works with 'because'
Mamama Mia is my conmfort movie soand I love see her on my phone every day forto remind me who iI want to be.
Mamma Mia is my comfort movie and I love see her on my phone every day to remind me who I want to be.
everyday is an adjective to describe something common. For example: brushing my teeth is part of my everyday routine. Here you would use 'every day' to say each day
Feedback
Great job! Mamma Mia is a great movie
My wallpaper
My wallpaper on my phone is Donna from Mamama Mia.
My wallpaper on my phone is Donna from Mamma Mia.
It's a beautiful photography of Donna in the middle of a crowd.
It's a beautiful photo of Donna in the middle of a crowd.
I love this picture because she's danceing, shine,ing, and she's free, we; out of the crowd you only notice her.
I love this picture because she's dancing, shining, and she's free; out of the crowd you only notice her.
I've always loved Donna very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I've always loved Donna very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent.
Not sure what you mean by "natural"
Maybe "genuine" or "sincere"?
Mamama Mia is my conmfort movie so I love to see her on my phone every day forto remind me of who iI want to be.
Mamma Mia is my comfort movie so I love to see her on my phone every day to remind me of who I want to be.
"everyday" is an adjective
|
My wallpaper This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
My wallpaper on my phone is Dona from Mamamia.
We don't need to use 'my' twice
My wallpaper on my phone is Donna from Mam |
|
It's a beautiful photography of Dona in the middle of a crowd.
It's a beautiful photograph Photography is the activity, Photograph is the picture
It's a beautiful photo |
|
I love this picture because she dance, shine, she's free, we only notice her.
I love this picture because she is danc You could combine this into 1 sentence like this but it's a bit odd
I love this picture because she's danc |
|
I've always loved Dona very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I've always loved Donna very much, because she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I've always loved Donna very much, because she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I would break this into two sentences but technically this works with 'because' I've always loved Donna very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. I've always loved Donna very much, she's so pretty, natural, sweet and independent. Not sure what you mean by "natural" Maybe "genuine" or "sincere"? |
|
Mamamia is my confort movie so I love see her on my phone everyday for remind me who i want to be.
Mam everyday is an adjective to describe something common. For example: brushing my teeth is part of my everyday routine. Here you would use 'every day' to say each day
Mam "everyday" is an adjective |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium