Due to fear of an earthquake becameduring the early fall semester, I moved back to my hometown which is called Kocaeli. Due to fear of an earthquake during the early fall semester, I moved back to my hometown which is called Kocaeli.

Due to fear of an earthquake becamein the early fall semester, I moved back to my hometown which is, called Kocaeli. Due to fear of an earthquake in the early fall semester, I moved back to my hometown, called Kocaeli.

Kocaeli is thea city neighbor city ofing Istanbul. Kocaeli is a city neighboring Istanbul.

With a car, you can go from Kocaeli to Istanbul in around 1-2 hours. With a car, you can go from Kocaeli to Istanbul in around 1-2 hours.

With a car, you can go from Kocaeli to Istanbul in around 1-2 hours. With a car, you can go from Kocaeli to Istanbul in around 1-2 hours.

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It might increasedtake longer due to traffic statue. It might take longer due to traffic.

I used toa fast train for transportation, it cames toand it took around 1.30 hours around. I used a fast train for transportation, and it took around 1.30 hours.

Always put "around" before the number, not after.

I used to take a fast train for transportation, it cames to 1.30. It takes about an hours aroundnd a half. I used to take a fast train for transportation. It takes about an hour and a half.

I knew the people who lived in the Istanbul, and they spendt more time than me in the traffic. I knew people who lived in the Istanbul, and they spent more time than me in traffic.

I knew the people who lived in the Istanbul, and they spendt more time than me in theI did in traffic. I knew people who lived in Istanbul, and they spent more time than I did in traffic.

Istanbul, Kocaeli and athe surroundings are a first degree earthquake zone. Istanbul, Kocaeli and the surroundings are a first degree earthquake zone.

Istanbul, Kocaeli and arounds arthe surrounding area are in the first degree earthquake zone. Istanbul, Kocaeli and the surrounding area are in the first degree earthquake zone.

On 17 August, 1999 there was earthquake which isose base point was Gölcük/ Kocaeli, it was horrific. On 17 August, 1999 there was earthquake whose base point was Gölcük/ Kocaeli, it was horrific.

The 17 August 1999 earthquake which is base point's ground zero was Gölcük/ and Kocaeli, i. It was horrific. The 17 August 1999 earthquake's ground zero was Gölcük and Kocaeli. It was horrific.

More than 17.,000 people died in their sleep. More than 17,000 people died in their sleep.

The seas side of Gölcük- Karamürsel downed to deep of seawas flooded. The seas side of Gölcük- Karamürsel was flooded.

The sea side of Gölcük- Karamürsel downed to deep offell deep into the sea. The seaside of Gölcük-Karamürsel fell deep into the sea.

I couldn't remember those days but, it still hurts. I couldn't remember those days but it still hurts.

I couldan't remember those days, but, it still hurts. I can't remember those days, but it still hurts.

The pPeople couldn't help to peoplhose who was screaming under the ground. People couldn't help those who was screaming under the ground.

The pPeople couldn't help to peoplhose who wasere screaming under the groundrubble. People couldn't help those who were screaming under the rubble.

Everyone firstly tried to save their own relatives first. Everyone tried to save their own relatives first.

Everyone firstly tried to save own relatives first. Everyone tried to save own relatives first.

Thanks God, we weren't there that night. Thank God we weren't there that night.

Thanks God, we weren't there that night. Thanks God we weren't there that night.

We were coming back to my mother's hometown to Kocaeli withby train. We were coming back to my mother's hometown to Kocaeli by train.

Use "by" for method of transportation. Examples: by car, by train, by plane

We were coming back tofrom my mother's hometown to Kocaeli withby train. We were coming back from my mother's hometown to Kocaeli by train.

And at 3 in the nightmorning, the train suddenly stopped. And at 3 in the morning, the train suddenly stopped.

Technically, 3 AM is in the morning.

And at 3 in the nightmorning, the train suddenly stopped. At 3 in the morning, the train suddenly stopped.

Nobody couldn't understand what' was going on. Nobody could understand what was going on.

Nobody couldn't understand what' was going on. Nobody could understand what was going on.

Everyone saidwas telling a different story. Everyone was telling a different story.

Everyone saihad a different storyexplanation. Everyone had a different explanation.

The people who trying to go their home, found a bus and contiune tonued on their journey. The people who trying to go home found a bus and continued on their journey.

The people who tryied to go their home, found a bus and contiune tonued their journey. The people who tried to go home found a bus and continued their journey.

At night, we were at therrived in Kocaeli. At night, we were arrived in Kocaeli.

AtBy night, we were at thearrived at Kocaeli. By night, we arrived at Kocaeli.

Everywherething was dark. Everything was dark.

Everywhere was dark. Everywhere was dark.

A person was shoutrunning and runnshouting "rRun, run, Tüpraş will explode! A person was running and shouting "Run, run, Tüpraş will explode!

A person was shouting and running "rRun, run, Tüpraş will explode!" A person was shouting and running "Run, run, Tüpraş will explode!"

When they reached toa nearby of house, they saw my uncle who was going to the funeral theof a person whothey knew. When they reached a nearby house, they saw my uncle who was going to the funeral of a person they knew.

When they reached to nearby of our house, they saw my uncle who was going to a funeral the person whofor someone they knew. When they reached near our house, they saw my uncle who was going to a funeral for someone they knew.

We couldn't stay there for more thenan a few days. We couldn't stay there for more than a few days.

Use "than" for comparisons. Examples: more than, bigger than, smaller than Use "then" to say what happened next in a story. Example: First we went to the store, and then we went home.

We couldn't stay there more thenan a few days. We couldn't stay there more than a few days.

To dropptake us to my mother's homelandtown, my father and his cousin takedgot a pickup, and we went back to my mother's homelandtown. To take us to my mother's hometown, my father and his cousin got a pickup and we went back to my mother's hometown.

"Hometown" would make more sense here, since "homeland" generally refers to an entire country.

To dropptake us to my mother's homeland, my father and his cousin takborrowed a pickup, and we went back to my mother's homeland. To take us to my mother's homeland, my father and his cousin borrowed a pickup, and we went back to my mother's homeland.

OThe owner gave them free for sake of themthe potatoes for free. The owner gave them the potatoes for free.

OThe owner gave them free for sake of them potatoes for free, for the victim's sake. The owner gave the potatoes for free, for the victim's sake.

My father and his cousin came back to Kocaeli, and left to the pickup in the center of village so thato people could take it. My father and his cousin came back to Kocaeli and left the pickup in the center of village so that people could take it.

My father and his cousin came back to Kocaeli, and left to the pickup in the center of village tso people could take ithem. My father and his cousin came back to Kocaeli, and left the pickup in the center of village so people could take them.

Big Istanbul earthquake is expecting a big earthquake anytime and I am afraid, that a lot of people are going to die again. Istanbul earthquake is expecting a big earthquake anytime and I am afraid that a lot of people are going to die again.

Big IstanbulA big earthquake in Istanbul is expectinged at any time and I am afraid, a lot of people are going to die again. A big earthquake in Istanbul is expected at any time and I am afraid a lot of people are going to die again.

My mother and father still couldn't get theunderstand how terrible is the situation was. My mother and father still couldn't understand how terrible the situation was.

My mother and father still couldn't get theunderstand how terrible is the situation was. My mother and father still couldn't understand how terrible the situation was.

They saw a potato field and asked the owner toif they could buy all of them for the earthquake victims. They saw a potato field and asked the owner if they could buy all of them for the earthquake victims.

They saw a potato field and asked the owner to buy all of them for the earthquake victims. They saw a potato field and asked the owner to buy all of them for the earthquake victims.