Learning From a Hard Work Learning From Hard Work

Learning From a Hard Work Learning From Hard Work

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices. I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

the preposition 'in' is needed here because 'office' is a place that you work IN

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices. I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices. I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

BecausSince this presentation was forabout other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand. Since this presentation was about other offices, I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

if you mention 'because' at the start of your sentence, you don't need to repeat 'so' !

Because this presentation was for other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand. Because this presentation was for other offices, I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

BecauseDue to the fact that this presentation was meant for other offices, so I facedI had to learn and get familiar with a lot of new terms to understand. Due to the fact that this presentation was meant for other offices, I had to learn and get familiar with a lot of new terms.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter. Thanks to my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and give it to our presenter.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter/hand it over to our presenter. Thanks to my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and give it to our presenter/hand it over to our presenter.

I could see different aspects of works in my company during the preparingation. I could see different aspects of work in my company during the preparation.

I could seobserve different aspectways of worksing in my company during the preparingation phase. I could observe different ways of working in my company during the preparation phase.

I should learn more forto widern my views more. I should learn to widen my views more.

I should learn more for widerto expand my world views. I should learn more to expand my world view.