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Tomiland

My city is called Tomilland. It's a huge, crowded, ancient city. The people are very friendly. They use public transport, the underground and the road. When you enter, you'll see: pyramids, mythical animal statues, a desert, maple and sakura trees and the icy part. There are dragons, unicorns, camels and penguins. Old people exercise and listen to ancient music in the park. It is so big that it's and independent country! There aren't any skyscrapers, though. But there's the Tomiwhile River and the Tomiatric Ocean, along with hundreds of lakes! However, instead of cars, the people use horses. I think Tomiland is amazing and beautiful.

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Tomiland

The people are very friendly.

I think Tomiland is amazing and beautiful.

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Tomiland


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My city is called Tomilland.


My city is called Tomilland. My city is called Tomilland.

Alt: I live in a city called Tomilland.

It's a huge, crowded, ancient city.


It's a huge, crowded, and ancient city. It's a huge, crowded, and ancient city.

Alt: It is an ancient city that is both huge and crowded.

The people are very friendly.


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They use public transport, the underground and the road.


They use public transport, the underground and the road. They use public transport, the underground and the road.

Alt: There is a public transportation system both above and below ground.

When you enter, you'll see: pyramids, mythical animal statues, a desert, maple and sakura trees and the icy part.


When you enter the city, you'll see: pyramids, mythical animal statues, a desert, maple and sakura trees and the icy parteak. When you enter the city, you'll see pyramids, mythical animal statues, a desert, maple and sakura trees and the icy peak.

There are dragons, unicorns, camels and penguins.


There are dragons, unicorns, camels, and penguins. There are dragons, unicorns, camels, and penguins.

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Old people exercise and listen to ancient music in the park.


Old people exercise and listen to ancient music in the park. Old people exercise and listen to ancient music in the park.

Alt: In the park, the elderly listen to old music and exercise.

It is so big that it's and independent country!


It is so big that it'and is and independent country! It is so big and is an independent country!

There aren't any skyscrapers, though.


There aren't any skyscrapers, though. There aren't any skyscrapers, though.

Alt: However, there aren't any skyscrapers.

But there's the Tomiwhile River and the Tomiatric Ocean, along with hundreds of lakes!


But there's the Tomiwhile River and the Tomiatric Ocean, along with hundreds of lakes! But there's the Tomiwhile River and the Tomiatric Ocean, along with hundreds of lakes!

Alt: The main bodies of water are the Tomiwhile River and the Tomiatric Ocean. There are also hundreds of lakes throughout.

However, instead of cars, the people use horses.


However, iInstead of cars, the people usride horses. Instead of cars, people ride horses.

I think Tomiland is amazing and beautiful.


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