May 11, 2025
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I got up at 7:00 Am then i made brekfast and ate then i went walk and i came back home at noon then i made lunch then i went to movie
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Writing about last weekend
I got up at 7:00 AmM, then iI made breakfast and ate then i went. After that, I went for a walk and i came back home at noon then i. Then, I made lunch then iand went to the movies.
I got up at 7:00 AM, then I made breakfast and ate. After that, I went for a walk and came back home at noon. Then, I made lunch and went to the movies.
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Writing about last weekend
I got up at 7:00 Am then iam, made breakfast and ate tit. Then iI went for a walk and i came back home at noon then i. I made lunch then i went to watch a movie.
I got up at 7:00am, made breakfast and ate it. Then I went for a walk and came back home at noon. I made lunch then went to watch a movie.
A good effort. Well done. Some small changes.
'I' should always be 'I' not 'i'.
Breakfast is the meal that breaks the fast (fasting = not eating) of the night so is spelt 'break' not 'brek'.
I made the sentences shorter for ease of reading.
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Writing About Last Weekend
I got up at 7:00 AmM, then i made and ate breakfast and ate then i went walk and i. Then, I went on a walk, came back home at noon then iand made lunch then i. Then, I went to a movie.
I got up at 7:00 AM, then made and ate breakfast. Then, I went on a walk, came back home at noon and made lunch. Then, I went to a movie.
If you are going to capitalise one letter of "AM" (or "PM"), then you must capitalise the other. Other ways to write it are "A.M.", "a.m." and "am".
"Went to a movie" means "went to see a movie". Alternatively: "Then, I went to the movies", which means "Then, I went to the cinema (where I watched a movie)."
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Major points to note:
(1) Do use puncutation, such as periods and commas.
(2) To avoid excessive use of "then", you can consider other phrases, such as "thereafter", "after that", "afterwards", "subsequently", etc. As you progress in your English learning journey, you will also learn grammatical structures that can similarly convey the order of events.
I got up at 7:00 AmM, then iI made brekfast and ate then iand ate breakfast. Then, I went walk ing and i came back home at noon then iand made lunch then i. Then, I went to movie
I got up at 7:00 AM, then I made and ate breakfast. Then, I went walking and came back home at noon and made lunch. Then, I went to movie
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Writing About Last Weekend
I got up at 7:00 Amand then iI made breakfast and. I ate , then iI went on a walk and iI came back home at noon then i. Then, I made lunch then i went toand after I went to go see a movie.
I got up at 7:00 and then I made breakfast. I ate, then I went on a walk and I came back home at noon. Then, I made lunch and after I went to go see a movie.
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I got up at 7:00 Am then i made brekfast and ate then i went walk and i came back home at noon then i made lunch then i went to movie
I got up at 7:00
I got up at 7:00 A
I got up at 7:00 A If you are going to capitalise one letter of "AM" (or "PM"), then you must capitalise the other. Other ways to write it are "A.M.", "a.m." and "am". "Went to a movie" means "went to see a movie". Alternatively: "Then, I went to the movies", which means "Then, I went to the cinema (where I watched a movie)."
I got up at 7:00 A good effort. Well done. Some small changes. 'I' should always be 'I' not 'i'. Breakfast is the meal that breaks the fast (fasting = not eating) of the night so is spelt 'break' not 'brek'. I made the sentences shorter for ease of reading.
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