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Arailymka

Nov. 21, 2024

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Hey there!!! My name is Arailym. I'm from Kazakhstan. Here is winter now, the weather is getting cold by the day. To be honest I don't like the cold weather. I was planning to go to warm country such a bali. I've lived in bali for three months. I liked so much this experience in my life. The first thing is a the people polite. I've never seen such a polite people like here. The second thing is the nature is wonderful. When I see bali first time, I thought I'm on the heaven. I couldn't believe how god can create all this beauty. I was so happy to see this. Today my first day here btw. I hope that we will help each other. Thank you guys, and wish you luck

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Hey there

Hey there!!!

My name is Arailym.

I'm from Kazakhstan.

I was so happy to see this.

I hope that we will help each other.

Thank you guys, and wish you luck

Hey there!!!

My name is Arailym.

I'm from Kazakhstan.

I was so happy to see this.

I hope that we will help each other.

Hey there!!!

My name is Arailym.

I'm from Kazakhstan.

To be honest I don't like the cold weather.

I was so happy to see this.

I hope that we will help each other.

I've lived in bali for three months.

I've never seen such a polite people like here.


I've never seenmet such a polite people likas I have here. I've never met such polite as I have here.

I've never seen such a polite people like the ones here. I've never seen such polite people like the ones here.

"The ones" is referring to the polite people. You can also replace it with "people" again ("I've never seen such polite people like the people here"), but it is a little repetitive.

I've never seen such a polite people like hebefore. I've never seen such polite people before.

I've never seen such a polite people like here. I've never seen such polite people.

The second thing is the nature is wonderful.


The second thing isSecond, the nature is wonderbeautiful. Second, the nature is beautiful.

Nothing really wrong, again.

The second thing is that the nature is wonderful. The second thing is that the nature is wonderful.

This is the same as the sentence about polite people. "Nature is wonderful" has a verb ("is"), so you need "that" in the sentence.

The second thing is the naturat the countryside is wonderful. The second thing is that the countryside is wonderful.

When I see bali first time, I thought I'm on the heaven.


When I see baliaw Bali for the first time, I thought I'm on the h was in Heaven. When I saw Bali for the first time, I thought I was in Heaven.

1. Use the past tense when speaking of experiences that happened in the past. On the other hand, you can say "When I first saw Bali, I think, 'I'm in Heaven.'" The difference is that the first sentence is what you felt at that time ("I thought I was in Heaven.") The second setence is a quote of what you thought at the time ("I thought, 'I'm in Heaven.'") 2. Generally, we say "in" when we're inside something, like a place. "I'm in the forest. I'm in the desert." But, we say "on" when we're on top of it "on the roof," "on a train." This is a little confusing, since we're "inside a train" but we say "on the train." English is weird.

When I seeaw bali for the first time, I thought I'm on the was in heaven. When I saw bali for the first time, I thought I was in heaven.

"Saw" should replace "see" because it is something you did in the past. "In" is usually used when talking about places, such as heaven.

When I see baliaw Bali the first time, I thought I'm on thein heaven. When I saw Bali the first time, I thought I'm in heaven.

When I see baliaw Bali for the first time, I thought I'm on the was in heaven. When I saw Bali for the first time, I thought I was in heaven.

I couldn't believe how god can create all this beauty.


I couldn't believe how god can created all this beauty. I couldn't believe how god created all this beauty.

I couldn't believe how god canreated/could create all this beauty. I couldn't believe how god created/could create all this beauty.

You can use "created" since nature's beauty was created in the past, or you can use "could create" which shows the ability to create this beauty more naturally.

I couldn't believe how gGod can create all this beauty. I couldn't believe how God can create all this beauty.

God begins with the capital letter.

I couldn't believe how gGod canould have created all this beauty. I couldn't believe how God could have created all this beauty.

I was so happy to see this.


Seeing it made me happy. or I was so happy to see ithis. Seeing it made me happy. or I was so happy to see it.

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Today my first day here btw.


Today is my first day here, btwy the way. Today is my first day here, by the way.

Today is my first day here btw. Today is my first day here btw.

Welcome!

Today is my first day here btw. Today is my first day here btw.

Today is my first day here btw. Today is my first day here btw.

I hope that we will help each other.


I hope that we willcan help each other. I hope that we can help each other.

Nothing really wrong with the sentence.

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Thank you guys, and wish you luck


Thank you guys, and I wish you luck. Thank you guys and I wish you luck.

Thank you guys, and I wish you luck Thank you guys, and I wish you luck

Sometimes you can write sentences without using "I", but it is better to have it here.

Thank you guys, and I wish you luck Thank you guys, and I wish you luck

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I liked so much this experience in my life.


I likoved so much this experience in my lifthe experience. I loved the experience.

I liked so muchreally enjoyed this experience in my life. I really enjoyed this experience in my life.

"I really enjoyed" sounds a little more natural. "So much" usually comes at the end of sentences.

I liked so muchenjoyed this experience in my life. so much. I enjoyed this experience in my life so much.

The first thing is a the people polite.


The first thing is aFirst, the people are polite. First, the people are polite.

The first thing is athat the people are polite. The first thing is that the people are polite.

When you are talking about a phrase with a verb ("the people are polite", where the verb is "are"), you want to use the word "that" before the phrase. You can also say "The first thing is the polite people". Since the phrase "polite people" does not have a verb, you don't need to use "that".

The first thing is athat the people are polite. The first thing is that the people are polite.

The first thing is athat the people are polite. The first thing is that the people are polite.

Hey there


Hey tThere Hey There

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Hey there!!!


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My name is Arailym.


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I'm from Kazakhstan.


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Here is winter now, the weather is getting cold by the day.


Here iIt's winter now,here now and the weather is getting cold by theer day by day. It's winter here now and the weather is getting colder day by day.

It's important to use the comparative "colder" here, as you compare each day to the one before.

HereIt is winter here now, so the weather is getting colder by the day. It is winter here now, so the weather is getting colder by the day.

It is more natural to have "here" in the middle of the sentence, rather than at the beginning.

Here it is winter now,and the weather is getting cold by the day. Here it is winter and the weather is getting cold by the day.

Here is winter now, and the weather is getting colder by the day. Here is winter now, and the weather is getting colder by the day.

To be honest I don't like the cold weather.


To be hHonestly, I don't like the cold weather. Honestly, I don't like cold weather.

Nothing wrong grammatically with your sentence. This is just more natural.

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To be honest, I don't like the cold weather. To be honest, I don't like the cold weather.

To be honest, I don't like the cold weather. To be honest, I don't like the cold weather.

I was planning to go to warm country such a bali.


I 've always planningwanted to go to a warm country such a b, like Bali. I've always wanted to go to a warm country, like Bali.

Again, nothing really wrong here, except for the missing comma. This just flows more naturally.

I was planning to go to a warm country such as bali. I was planning to go to a warm country such as bali.

I was planning to go to warm country such a bBali. I was planning to go to warm country such a Bali.

Country names are proper noun so they should start with the capital letter.

I was planning to go to warm country such a bBali. I was planning to go to warm country such Bali.

I've lived in bali for three months.


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I've lived in bali for three months. I lived in bali for three months.

"I've lived in Bali" means that you are living in Bali right now. "I lived in Bali" means that you were living there in the past, but you aren't living there anymore.

I've lived in bBali for three months. I've lived in Bali for three months.

I've lived in bBali for three months. I've lived in Bali for three months.

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